Classic vs Disasterpeice420
 

10 -16 lines
no c/v
no d/v
no feeding
no prewrite
verse due a hour after check in.
lets go.

hey I'll be back in 15 minutes aight.

checked in.

but i'll be back in 15 min switching computers.

Checckity Checck Mutha-Fucka
Checcked' ... in ************* .......


Diluted and whack your rhymes polluted at Best,
when battlin me is like Taking two to the chest,
Weak in your styles you makin a foll of yourself,
Wasting my time aint the only blow you've dealt,
You suck dawg, face it, no matter how hard you try,
Your rhymes are just wasted, defeat, i know you taste it, but you still deny,
As a real emcee, hell you're barely a wannabe,
You're so terrible you're barely even on my radar screen,
You're Still a pussy yet your style in your attack is crap,
You Only aproach a subject when you find obstacles begins to lack,
You Attack opponents after someone else goes the distance,
And then cause yourself the authentic definition of a lyricist,
(Please) your just a practice player wishing to wear a uniform,
Washing the captains jocks filled with rage and scorn,
So Classic fuck you it's plain to see im lyrical,
The day you fuck a fat chic over a dick would be a mircale,


Fuck im done' i know it's shit but Classic's going to merk me!

Anyways good luck.. Classic'

Da Classic Verse
 

Okay here we go...just like you said it's nothing....lets see who wins

Oh don't get your nipples hard off of this.

Lets go.

I will correct the way you rap from excuse me to saying pardon
A green plant your herbish, I grew you in the back of the garden
Start with you tied to a mack truck detaching your breast
Throw darts to deflate your silicone to a masculent chest
Stop asking the rest, who is next when you giving me leeway
If my dick had wheels your mouth considered the freeway
Your rhymes weak like if an ant attempt lifting a power plant
You know my lyrical punches will swell your breast like implants
I'm the maker of your creation, It came to a disasterpiece
You the reason God's creation of women isnt a masterpiece
Are you a choice of champions how long will you everlast
Just like your bottom portion, when you spit, your flat ass
I done terrorized, vandalized, analyzed your weapons
Scandalized quotes in sigs, your only murderous method
Give me a second, let me tell you I'm the one that recruit this
I had expected her to get noticed for her skills, not her cuteness

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Bare witness to the greatest
If you can't beat us, Join Us

Alright Good Drop Playa' .. Ahhh

Uppppppppppin 4 votes!!!

C'Mon People Drop Some Votes On This Shit!!!!!!!!!


-Highly Appriciate It-

Will Return The Favor....

Daclassic wins this one. DisasterPeice420, dont say that you think your battle is bad. You had some nice punches Daclassic.

It's Cool...!!! - - -


C'Mon Ya'll Step Up

And Drop some Honest Votes

oh i forgot to tell you dp people with over a hundred posts can vote only....thats probably why it's taking a while...well i dont know.....uppin

It's Cool.. lol I Know You Murdered Me' ..!

Upppppin 4 votes

Weak in your styles you makin a foll of yourself,
Wasting my time aint the only blow you've dealt,
You suck dawg, face it, no matter how hard you try,
Your rhymes are just wasted, defeat, i know you taste it, but you still deny,
As a real emcee, hell you're barely a wannabe,
You're so terrible you're barely even on my radar screen,
You're Still a pussy yet your style in your attack is crap,
You Only aproach a subject when you find obstacles begins to lack,
You Attack opponents after someone else goes the distance,
And then cause yourself the authentic definition of a lyricist,
(Please) your just a practice player wishing to wear a uniform,
Washing the captains jocks filled with rage and scorn,
So Classic fuck you it's plain to see im lyrical,
The day you fuck a fat chic over a dick would be a mircale,

...girl...lemme talk to u for a minute...whats up wit ur rhymes? u started half ur verse with "you".......ur closing...didnt make too much sense....n i aint seen a single punch in ur verse girl..since our battle u've fallen off truth be told




I will correct the way you rap from excuse me to saying pardon
A green plant your herbish, I grew you in the back of the garden
Start with you tied to a mack truck detaching your breast
Throw darts to deflate your silicone to a masculent chest
flow decent..not too much punches so far
Stop asking the rest, who is next when you giving me leeway
If my dick had wheels your mouth considered the freeway
decent punch....
Your rhymes weak like if an ant attempt lifting a power plant
You know my lyrical punches will swell your breast like implants
.....hmmm,nothin hard hittin
I'm the maker of your creation, It came to a disasterpiece
You the reason God's creation of women isnt a masterpiece
pretty good punch
Are you a choice of champions how long will you everlast
Just like your bottom portion, when you spit, your flat ass
umm..u could've hit her much harder about her flat ass...taht was weak

I done terrorized, vandalized, analyzed your weapons
Scandalized quotes in sigs, your only murderous method
hahaha...thats funny son.........good hit at their crew

Give me a second, let me tell you I'm the one that recruit this
I had expected her to get noticed for her skills, not her cuteness
ummm..i think ur complimenting her? not a good way to close a battle

but yea..........the line about the scanadlized quotes is funny as hell..n the masterpiece line is decent too...u spittin on a higher level daclassic...u did have some filler lines...........dp...girl i dunno u needa get some punches in ur verses......i'm out

ok nice drop the both of u both threw some ok punches wit ok structure and a descnet flow

dp-

bestline-You Attack opponents after someone else goes the distance,
And then cause yourself the authentic definition of a lyricist,


dat was tite

worsteline-You Attack opponents after someone else goes the distance,
And then cause yourself the authentic definition of a lyricist,


not da best start

overall yo verse gets a 8.4/10

classic

bestline-Start with you tied to a mack truck detaching your breast
Throw darts to deflate your silicone to a masculent chest

nice

worsteline-nun

overall yo verse gets a 9.3/10

winner-da classic

whoa who the fucks tits are in the sig....oh....sorry nice battle heres my honest vote..ill try my breast..i meant best to make an honest decision

aiight my breakdown:

disaster: nice drop gurl....i was feelin ur flow..but ur punches were ok..how come u came alot harder versus me? lmfao..anywayz this was a nice drop you had a few good punches it flowed nice and ok vocab

62/100

CLassic:i think u came harder,....this shit was nice i was feelin dat masculent chest line that was sick lmfao i was like.....damn......you had sum lines..your worst line was that ant line that was kinda gay lmfao but u took this

65/100

my honest vote goes to :class

good battle though