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okayy this aint my first walk in this park i've done bout 15 mutha fuckin open mics so thats why i called myself the king of the open mic

hook:you dont seem to see this evil in me when i spit... these motha fuckin lyrics x2

veres#1:check one two two one now check/
forget ice protect ya chest rock a vest

imma killa my flows are too satanic/
you dont like me well just grin and bear it

i cant stand it so please dont fuck wit me/
murder all and walk away so casully

imma psycho path doin gothic rap/
sittin back doin drive bys in poniacs

hook: you dont seem to see this evil in me when i spit... these mother fuckin lyrics x2

chores:i live to die and fight to survive i hate you all no lie no lie
when you see me you betta fear me i'll kill you all no lie no lie x2

verse#2:i aint afraid to give the mutha fuckin finger/
i roam the block the streets i linger

the razor blade is one inch to ya vein feel the pain/
the AK is one inch to ya brain let the blood rain/
aint leavin the game till the streets get blazed/
write ya name on ya tombstone and dig ya grave

blood spills in ya eyes ya sight gets blurier/
aint lloyd banks but guess what im a worrior

so fuck you fuck all of you the crhyme sindicate is gonna kill haha

It was koo... it wasn't absloute fire. It was hard to find a beat to your shit.
But i was feelin drive bys in pontiacs

pretty good btu ur flow was off a lil