Tens
 

yo the other day i ran into a couple of tens,
at the mall and they were hangin with a couple of friends.
they both stuffed thier chest, their breast B's at best,
and they were lookin for their next best guest to impress.
so i thought to myself, might as well be me.
so i turned around and rolled up my sleeves.
but as i approached, i was like JEEZ!
they started makin out like D.I.K.E.'s
but just right before i was ready to leave,
the blonde looked up and started yellin at me.
"hey you wanna join in? i saw you lookin at me."
na, i was goin to the pop machine.
i need a fuckin sprite its like a hundred degrees,
but if you'de like i'll take you back to my C.R.I.B.
and i'll take you both on like a Crispy Cream,
and eat yo ass out til you start to scream!

Let me know if you were feelin that

it was aight it actually sounds like a commercial verse, u lackin vocab though, how old r u "and eat yo ass out til you start to scream" i like i like lol

thats all gd, keep goin ;)

hey, thanks for the feedback.

No, I wasn't feeling that