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discharge vrs. infamous j
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u spit first no crew no d/r blah blah blah spit your verse 30 minutes after checkin in |
Yo Check Out My Battle With Chucky
Don't Front Just Vote What's Really Good |
ok well how about you spit your verse before i fall asleep already damn
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Check It Out...
I JUST FUCKED MY OPPONENT NAMED CHUCKY HARD
NOW I COME BACK WIT A VENGENCE AGAINST THIS RETARD CALLED DISCHARGE MY BATTERY'S LONG LASTIN YOURS IZ FUCKED SO YA SEATBELT SHOULD BE FASTEN I'M TAKIN YOU TO RIDE "DA KILLA RHYMA" WHERE I ALWAYZ WIN CAUZE YA SHIT IZ ONLY MINA' I CHARGE BETTER THAN THEY DO IN ARMIES IF YOU GOT A CREW?, MYSELF THEY CAN'T HARM ME I'M LIKE 2PAC ALL DAY HOLLERIN FUCK YOU I END GAY MEN'S LIVES BY KILLIN EM AFTER THEY FINISH HUMPIN YOU LESS THAN 20 BARS I WIN THIS MATCH GOOD LUCK ON YA OTHER BATTLES AND STAY OUT MY PATH. :shoot: :shoot: VOTERZ HOLLA BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
ur next loss is comin so ur pride will be bruised,all your rhymes are old and used//
ill leave u dazed and confused,uve been slaughtered and lyrically abused// ur "lyrical-bomb" has been defused, but stay on here u keep these people amused// dont wish me good luck please believe nigga i dont want it or need it// u child mollester, ill catch u like micheal jackson"JUST-BEAT-IT!"// for rhymin cat you do not have a knack,stay on track.........// ur the fucking creator of wack,and that statement i will not retract// u fuckin lost do u catch my drift?........ me a retard,? u just got outa diapers u illetrate bitch// by u even spitting a verse u give me more amo to hit you with// |
Good battle y'all breakdown:
Flow: Dis Structure: Infam Punches: Dis ( michael jackson punch killed it) Personals: Dis Multies: Tie Creativity: Dis Opener: Tie( Infam yours was wack, an dis yours was strecthed) Closer: Dis Vote: Dis |
OK THIS WAS KINDA A BLOW OUT
DICHARGE ur next loss is comin so ur pride will be bruised,all your rhymes are old and used// ill leave u dazed and confused,uve been slaughtered and lyrically abused// -NICE MULTI! me a retard,? u just got outa diapers u illetrate bitch// by u even spitting a verse u give me more amo to hit you with// -WOW dont wish me good luck please believe nigga i dont want it or need it// u child mollester, ill catch u like micheal jackson"JUST-BEAT-IT!"// HAHAHA NICE PUNCH INFAMOUSJ -HE HAD NO GOOD LINES TO ME DISCHARGE FLOW,PUNCHES,OPEN,AND CLOSE WAS BETTER THAN INFAMOUS SO DISCHAGE GETS MY VOTE JUST BECAUSE HE WAS OVERALL BETTER VOTE=DISCHARGE |
Check Out My Other Battles, Don
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yo i got to give discharge for this
he had betta everything punches 9/10 flos and structure 8/10 vocab 8/10 infamous punches 7/10 flow and structure was kinda nice 7.5/10 vocab 6/10 vote= discharge |
Infamous J:
okay overall u did average for a nub... u had an average structure and all flow was ight.. best verse: I'M LIKE 2PAC ALL DAY HOLLERIN FUCK YOU I END GAY MEN'S LIVES BY KILLIN EM AFTER THEY FINISH HUMPIN YOU worst verse: alot overall:7/10 Discharge: ight u was overall good.. average structure.. good flow and good multies best line: dont wish me good luck please believe nigga i dont want it or need it// u child mollester, ill catch u like micheal jackson"JUST-BEAT-IT!"// worst line: me a retard,? u just got outa diapers u illetrate bitch// by u even spitting a verse u give me more amo to hit you with// overall:8/10 vote=discharge |
lol ummmm check it
infamous um your opener i wasnt fealin at all brah the punch was stretched and it never really connected either and your closer was pitiful there wasnt even a punch shit just made me shake my head an scroll down real quick and the rest of your verse yo maybe had 2 good lines to me i didnt feal it at your structure was about the best thing about your verse try workin on closin your battles better and staying consistent with good solid punchs and dont use as much filler discharge your opener was decent good mulites in it kept it flowin pretty well punch wasnt that good though and the closer was decent but try not to feed of his verse like that but you did pretty good to use it against him but dotn do that to much and th rest of your verse was pretty nice good punchs and vocab good drop just work on your structure and take unnessecary words out of your lines to help vote discharge |
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