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shadow 05-05-04 11:14 PM

discharge vrs. infamous j
 
10-15 lines
u spit first
no crew
no d/r blah blah blah
spit your verse 30 minutes after checkin in

Infamous J 05-05-04 11:30 PM

Yo Check Out My Battle With Chucky

Don't Front Just Vote What's Really Good

shadow 05-05-04 11:34 PM

ok well how about you spit your verse before i fall asleep already damn

Infamous J 05-05-04 11:48 PM

Check It Out...
 
I JUST FUCKED MY OPPONENT NAMED CHUCKY HARD
NOW I COME BACK WIT A VENGENCE AGAINST THIS RETARD CALLED DISCHARGE
MY BATTERY'S LONG LASTIN
YOURS IZ FUCKED SO YA SEATBELT SHOULD BE FASTEN
I'M TAKIN YOU TO RIDE "DA KILLA RHYMA"
WHERE I ALWAYZ WIN CAUZE YA SHIT IZ ONLY MINA'
I CHARGE BETTER THAN THEY DO IN ARMIES
IF YOU GOT A CREW?, MYSELF THEY CAN'T HARM ME
I'M LIKE 2PAC ALL DAY HOLLERIN FUCK YOU
I END GAY MEN'S LIVES BY KILLIN EM AFTER THEY FINISH HUMPIN YOU
LESS THAN 20 BARS I WIN THIS MATCH
GOOD LUCK ON YA OTHER BATTLES AND STAY OUT MY PATH.



:shoot: :shoot:

VOTERZ HOLLA BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

shadow 05-06-04 12:13 AM

ur next loss is comin so ur pride will be bruised,all your rhymes are old and used//
ill leave u dazed and confused,uve been slaughtered and lyrically abused//
ur "lyrical-bomb" has been defused, but stay on here u keep these people amused//
dont wish me good luck please believe nigga i dont want it or need it//
u child mollester, ill catch u like micheal jackson"JUST-BEAT-IT!"//
for rhymin cat you do not have a knack,stay on track.........//
ur the fucking creator of wack,and that statement i will not retract//
u fuckin lost do u catch my drift?........
me a retard,? u just got outa diapers u illetrate bitch//
by u even spitting a verse u give me more amo to hit you with//

Triple_N 05-06-04 12:22 AM

Good battle y'all breakdown:
Flow: Dis
Structure: Infam
Punches: Dis ( michael jackson punch killed it)
Personals: Dis
Multies: Tie
Creativity: Dis
Opener: Tie( Infam yours was wack, an dis yours was strecthed)
Closer: Dis
Vote: Dis

T12U3 K1LlA 05-06-04 08:42 AM

OK THIS WAS KINDA A BLOW OUT

DICHARGE
ur next loss is comin so ur pride will be bruised,all your rhymes are old and used//
ill leave u dazed and confused,uve been slaughtered and lyrically abused//
-NICE MULTI!
me a retard,? u just got outa diapers u illetrate bitch//
by u even spitting a verse u give me more amo to hit you with//
-WOW

dont wish me good luck please believe nigga i dont want it or need it//
u child mollester, ill catch u like micheal jackson"JUST-BEAT-IT!"//
HAHAHA NICE PUNCH


INFAMOUSJ
-HE HAD NO GOOD LINES TO ME

DISCHARGE FLOW,PUNCHES,OPEN,AND CLOSE WAS BETTER THAN INFAMOUS SO DISCHAGE GETS MY VOTE JUST BECAUSE HE WAS OVERALL BETTER
VOTE=DISCHARGE

Infamous J 05-06-04 08:43 AM

Check Out My Other Battles, Don

M.F.P 05-06-04 08:36 PM

yo i got to give discharge for this

he had betta everything

punches 9/10
flos and structure 8/10
vocab 8/10

infamous

punches 7/10
flow and structure was kinda nice 7.5/10
vocab 6/10


vote= discharge

Mixx 05-06-04 09:06 PM

Infamous J:
okay overall u did average for a nub... u had an average structure and all flow was ight..
best verse:
I'M LIKE 2PAC ALL DAY HOLLERIN FUCK YOU
I END GAY MEN'S LIVES BY KILLIN EM AFTER THEY FINISH HUMPIN YOU

worst verse: alot

overall:7/10

Discharge:
ight u was overall good.. average structure.. good flow and good multies
best line:
dont wish me good luck please believe nigga i dont want it or need it//
u child mollester, ill catch u like micheal jackson"JUST-BEAT-IT!"//

worst line:
me a retard,? u just got outa diapers u illetrate bitch//
by u even spitting a verse u give me more amo to hit you with//

overall:8/10

vote=discharge

E Looch 05-06-04 09:08 PM

lol ummmm check it

infamous um your opener i wasnt fealin at all brah the punch was stretched and it never really connected either and your closer was pitiful there wasnt even a punch shit just made me shake my head an scroll down real quick and the rest of your verse yo maybe had 2 good lines to me i didnt feal it at your structure was about the best thing about your verse try workin on closin your battles better and staying consistent with good solid punchs and dont use as much filler

discharge your opener was decent good mulites in it kept it flowin pretty well punch wasnt that good though and the closer was decent but try not to feed of his verse like that but you did pretty good to use it against him but dotn do that to much and th rest of your verse was pretty nice good punchs and vocab good drop just work on your structure and take unnessecary words out of your lines to help

vote discharge


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