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discharge vrs LiL ChucKy
10-15 lines
u spit first house rules go |
It's "LiL ChucKy" battlin again, this time i'm feelin a "lil lucky."
I'll smack ya in da "mouth", and sholve your throat wit a 15" "trout." I'm straight "spitting this", always pickin it up and "hittin this." Slice your body into "pieces", spread it out on a pie of "pizza." This gettin "easier", every night fuckin ur girl for "pleasure." Hit ya in tha back of tha head wit a "broken-brick", Cuz u a "broke-Prick." Livin it in tha "high-life", goin in any direction but "my-way." Sit back n "relax", gonna sholve ur mouth wit sum chocolate "ex-lax." Your straight "constipated", always gettin fuckin "munipulated." I'm always tryin to "drop" "cops", jumpin tha fence rippin mah "tee-tops." I'ma end this "battle", and watch u get straight up "strattled." |
u should kno by the start of this battle that u already lost//
ur fuckin soft and the way u think ur hard pisses me off// give up,leave, just quit u aint gonna win much-less-score// ifu get pussy it will be by a trailor trash new jersey whore// ull never be able to spit, u aint shit, please just quit// like a candle uve been lit,u lost ur ass has been hit// show some respect,ur a rookie see i roll with the vets// ur goin downhill like those terrible ass newjersey nets// rhymim'bout treetops and shit like that, that shit is wack// ur vocabulary is wrong, next time keep ur dictionary in-tact// i didnt use anything good its to easy to murder this cat// |
uppin for votes.
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Ok this was not close battle at all....Breakdown
Lil chunky....man half the time ya shit didn't rhyme, verse was weak, punches weak, personals, none exist, vocab basic, no multies, weak shit Discharge...you didn't really come hard in this but why would ya have to, punches were ok, biggest plus your shit actually rhymed, personasl didn't really have any, vocab was solid, flow was great Flow: Dis Structure: Dis Punches: Dis Personals: Tie Vote: Discharge |
Discharge - Good spit man, had a good flow goin on.. and followed it up wit some hard hitten punches.
Best Line - show some respect,ur a rookie see i roll with the vets// ur goin downhill like those terrible ass newjersey nets// Worst Line - NONE Lil Chucky - Good spit man.. had some good punches in there.. flowed pretty good. Best Line - NONE Worst Line - It's "LiL ChucKy" battlin again, this time i'm feelin a "lil lucky." I'll smack ya in da "mouth", and sholve your throat wit a 15" "trout." OVERALL - I gotta give dis battle to DIS.. better punches and good solid flow, Lil chucky you had some alright flow and good multi's but I wasnt feeling your punches to much.. and your shit didnt ryme in some places.. work on some of that shit and you will get better. VOTE - Discharge RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121858 |
Ight.. wut else can i say.. KO'd.. imo it should be ko
Lil Chucky:ur flow was ight and structure was ight.. ur main problem was RHYMES.. and punches.. they both was wack overall:5.5/10 discharge: u had a good flow, average structure and good multies.. u also had more punches and they landed harder... easily won overall:8/10 |
Yea this was a one sided battle,
Opener-Charger Flow-Charge Personal-not really that many PUnches-Charger Complexity- Both failry simple Finisher- Charger Nice try chucky just keep battle'n that propbaby would have beat some newbs i've seen |
discharge got this beause he tually rhymed wrds together unlike chucky.Dischrge had bette flowand punches...chucy ur flow was of witc threw off your punches cuse i good punch rhymes well.
My vote:dis |
Lil Chucky-nice flow,but I didn't like how you rhymed hittin this with spittin this.That sounded kinda stupuid.
Best line-Sit back n "relax", gonna sholve ur mouth wit sum chocolate "ex-lax." Your straight "constipated", always gettin fuckin "munipulated." Worst line-I'm straight "spitting this", always pickin it up and "hittin this." Slice your body into "pieces", spread it out on a pie of "pizza." Discharged-I liked ur verse.Nice flow and nice punches. Best Line-give up,leave, just quit u aint gonna win much-less-score// if u get pussy it will be by a trailor trash new jersey whore// Worst Line-ur vocabulary is wrong, next time keep ur dictionary in-tact// i didnt use anything good its to easy to murder this cat// Vote-Discharged......this was kinda one-sided. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121779 ^^^drop a vote in my battle |
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