MarvolousJ1009 Vs FatAL_LyRikzZ
 

Check Check...U Know Rules

jea..checkin....now u gota check in and first da 3 is a t.k.o soon as u check in ima drop

Alright Yo Check CHeck(IN)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........

beefin with jay? nah u not able da size of my gun a make u tear quick-
u "take bars from da cat in da outlaws" datz y they call u "fatal lyrikzz"-
(think about it)

i got some dude in cali dat clap ya moms then clap u and ya sista-
ya record's sad u couldn't get a "strong win(d)" if u battled in a "twister"-

after im done clappin da ratchett,ya fam a be at ya wake grabbin ya casket-
quit rap u just makin a "ass" out yaself on da "net" like u "sat in da basket"-

you say u nice? i cant tell by ya record u gotta convience me yo-
dogg cuzz u suck and u got no "hott-lines" no more like "ms.cleo"-

u think u could jay?? nah i'll dump trey's and probly sit in a cell-
i could give a fukk if niggaz is gassin u and say ya spittin is well-
dunny but after i "bus(t)" all u gettin is a "1 way ticket" da hell-
ya boys aint gon be "throwin pennie's in water" but they gon be in a hospital "wishin" u "well"-


ya verse is 2nite dunn..

Fatal Is My Game Aint Believe Me Read My Name
Actin Like You Dont Know After This U Better Run FOr Shame
Time Is Tickin Like A BomB ima KO YOu
After This I Leave Ya "MESSED UP" Like A Bad Hair-Do
LEavin You ROtting Like Corpses Gettin Rotten
Leavin You Mysterious In Public U Gonna Get Forgotten
Y Would you Want To Battle Me IN The First Place
Really,Thou I Leave My FingerPrints Planted In YA Face
Ill is My Game Just Check These BARS
Counting So Many Wins I Cant Even Count That Far
Keepin It Real Never Fake I Remain To Stay Dope You Hearin This ?
Zoomin So Fast Next Time Read My Name FATAL LYRIKzZ

You Like That LOL

IITE Votes NOw PLzZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol nigga did a song....dat was creative tho...UPPIN 4 VOTES PPL

Uppin For VOTES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

PLz Uppin For Votes I Will RETURN THE FAVA !!!!!!!

Upppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnn Vote Ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........

I'm Goin For Fatal, He Got Better Flows
He Lives Up To His Name
But Marvelous Had A Wack Flow And Confusin
His Rhymes Were Big Ass Words And His Lines Were Too Big
It Takes Time To Read It
This Is My Rating:
Fatal:7/10
Marvelous:0/10

Alright 1-0 Appreciate The Vote...............Still Uppin

this is an obvious win yall come on.

BREAKDOWN

FATAL
u didnt even battle man that was a verse bout ur self and a weak one at that, a battle is supposed to be against the other guy not juss all self-glorification. come on now.

MARVOLOUSJ
u murdered this man, wat a shame. u wasted such a verse on this. sick verse homeboi. the punches were hard. flow was aight tho. the metas, vocab, multis, and wordplay were all off the chain

VOTE-MARVOLOUSJ

Alright 1-1 Still Uppin THOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

opener-Marv.
strcuture-Fatal & Marv. both on that one, well done
punchlines-Fatal
creativity- Fatal
personals-Marv. "i got some dude in cali dat clap ya moms then clap u and ya sista-
ya record's sad u couldn't get a "strong win(d)" if u battled in a "twister"-"
The overall is self-explanitory, sorry dawg but
But as for the topic of battling go I am going to have to go with Marv, cause he stuck to the topic of battling and that is very important.