plustwo vs. Mad Dog
 

aight the rules r as follows:

no feeding
no d/r
no h8 votes
no crew votes

aight good luck

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aight dwag lests do this

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Checkin in good luck..............................

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this guy can suck his own dick like marylin manson//
if u got kidnapped your parents wouldn't pay even if there was no ransom//
i tear the mic up like a piece of paper//
your mum screamed arggghhhh, thats all it took to rape her//
just remember when your tossing and turning in your grave//
it wasn't you, it was me your bitch was trying to save//
but luckily, i managed to escape with my life//
and that great fuck i had last night, oops i forgot, that was your wife//
you know i was born to fight and bread to kill//
oh my god! this battle is so easy, me 1 you... nil//
yo... don't forget it rains and it pours// if i got my dick chopped off it would still be bigger than yours//
ill take out my 9 and unload in your chest//
this isnt your day, you shouldav wore a bullet proof vest//
aight i think im through//
lets just see what you can do.

aight im off i should be back on l8a sometime, good luck.

What the hell was that?...ur raps were all over the shop/
Still really personal...but ur raps were still a flop/
I heard better shit than that...when im takin a shit!/
Infact i need 1 now...and ur gonn be my toilet roll bitch/
Now ur names Plustwo...But ima minus u ho/
Punchlines i'll use that u cant take...to me this is a straight K.O/
And a bulletproof vest for what...u shootin blanks my friend/
Ur girls only got her kids...well work it out my friend/
Now as i unlock my flow machine gun shots go right through ur home/
Expose ur dome like Mcauly...u were all home alone/
Now u was born and bread HA...like bread i'll slice u till ur dead/
Fuck yo mom while ur watchin...watch me laugh as u cry off ur head/
"MOMMY PLEASE NO...I THOUGHT U LOVED DADDY THOUGH!!"/
MOM: That mutha fucka...na u should support him...HIS UR BRO/
Now battlin me got u lit like the olympic flame/
I just put u out b4 u finished the Journey/
RapBattles just witnessed yo shame!!/

Thats all Lets get this ball rollin VOTES!!

my vote:......

:thumbup: *PLUSTWO* :thumbup:

i fink mad dogs was good, but plustwo's flowed alot more easily.
the vocab used by plustwo was good, although md dog used many good ones too

plustwo's best lines:
"you know i was born to fight and bread to kill//
oh my god! this battle is so easy, me 1 you... nil//" <-----harsh! lol :laugh:

mad dog's best line:
"Now as i unlock my flow machine gun shots go right through ur home/
Expose ur dome like Mcauly...u were all home alone/" <--- very good

Uppin#1...........................................

Plustwo -Good spit man, had some weak spots.. but overall good spit with some good flowing lines and some hard hitten punches.

Best Line - yo... don't forget it rains and it pours// if i got my dick chopped off it would still be bigger than yours// (lmao.. niiice)

Worst Line - aight i think im through//
lets just see what you can do. (weak ending)

Mad Dog - Good spit man.. had some alright punches in there.. and oyur flow was alright also..

Best Line - I heard better shit than that...when im takin a shit!/
Infact i need 1 now...and ur gonn be my toilet roll bitch/ (good punch)

Worst Line - And a bulletproof vest for what...u shootin blanks my friend/
Ur girls only got her kids...well work it out my friend/

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to Plus for better flow and harder punches, both of you need to work on using metaz.. Mad man.. your shit was good just wasnt feeling your style.. you need to work on your flow a little bit.. and harden up your punches and add some multi's.

VOTE - Plustwo

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121858

this guy can suck his own dick like marylin manson//
if u got kidnapped your parents wouldn't pay even if there was no ransom//


^^ good opener there...lol

What the hell was that?...ur raps were all over the shop/
Still really personal...but ur raps were still a flop/
I heard better shit than that...when im takin a shit!/
Infact i need 1 now...and ur gonn be my toilet roll bitch/

^^ haha..good 1

ill take out my 9 and unload in your chest//
this isnt your day, you shouldav wore a bullet proof vest//
aight i think im through//
lets just see what you can do.
^^^ blah closer


"MOMMY PLEASE NO...I THOUGHT U LOVED DADDY THOUGH!!"/
MOM: That mutha fucka...na u should support him...HIS UR BRO/

^^ decent

aiyo 4 real...I'm givin this one to Madd Dog simply cuz his verse mad me chuckle out loud a couple times...and I personally like the hard style of his verse..

Vote: Madd

plustwo you a sick fuck and you lost this the worst line you had was

this guy can suck his own dick like marylin manson//

and another thing is that you aint that good so give up cause you suck
V/mad dog

Wow thanx thats blatantly gonna get dq 4 1 inadequate feedback & 2 h8 vote...control urself ok keep ur beef outta my thread uppin#2 HONEST VOTES PLZ

this guy can suck his own dick like marylin manson//
if u got kidnapped your parents wouldn't pay even if there was no ransom//
6...1st line was wack, 2nd was gud, not much 4 structure there.
i tear the mic up like a piece of paper//
your mum screamed arggghhhh, thats all it took to rape her//
5...basic and not really gud, second line had nuthin to do wit the setup!!
just remember when your tossing and turning in your grave//
it wasn't you, it was me your bitch was trying to save//
7...gud punch, basic wordplay in there but affective still.
but luckily, i managed to escape with my life//
and that great fuck i had last night, oops i forgot, that was your wife//
6...still wit the basic shit. and no structure.
you know i was born to fight and bread to kill//
oh my god! this battle is so easy, me 1 you... nil//
7...gud punch but still basic, improve ure wordplay.
yo... don't forget it rains and it pours//
if i got my dick chopped off it would still be bigger than yours//
6...aight punch i guess but pretty basic and weak diss.
ill take out my 9 and unload in your chest//
this isnt your day, you shouldav wore a bullet proof vest//
4...bleh! Wack punch, no affect at all.
aight i think im through//
lets just see what you can do.
1...i do lines two by two so this classifies as ure closer. WACK AS FUCK!


What the hell was that?...ur raps were all over the shop/
Still really personal...but ur raps were still a flop/
5...bleh! not a gud line. too basic and not really a punch!
I heard better shit than that...when im takin a shit!/
Infact i need 1 now...and ur gonn be my toilet roll bitch/
6...basic but affective.
Now ur names Plustwo...But ima minus u ho/
Punchlines i'll use that u cant take...to me this is a straight K.O/
7...a gud line my man, u dissed his name i like it.
And a bulletproof vest for what...u shootin blanks my friend/
Ur girls only got her kids...well work it out my friend/
7...another gud verse, gud feedin.
Now as i unlock my flow machine gun shots go right through ur home/
Expose ur dome like Mcauly...u were all home alone/
6...aight punch, bit of a meta in there.
Now u was born and bread HA...like bread i'll slice u till ur dead/
Fuck yo mom while ur watchin...watch me laugh as u cry off ur head/
5...not gud really!!
"MOMMY PLEASE NO...I THOUGHT U LOVED DADDY THOUGH!!"/
MOM: That mutha fucka...na u should support him...HIS UR BRO/
8...lmfao!! Funny shit!! Gud strong punch!!
Now battlin me got u lit like the olympic flame/
I just put u out b4 u finished the Journey/
RapBattles just witnessed yo shame!!/
4...damn! u hit a gud punch and then ended wit a wack ass bar.

Points Breakdown

plustwo - 42/80
Mad Dog - 48/80

V/ - Mad Dog

uppin#3

This was an extremely close one. Both had good flows and structures. This was like a boxing match, the amount of hard punches thrown. PlusTwo's first lines made me wanna read the whole verse, but Mad Dog's rhyme:

"MOMMY PLEASE NO...I THOUGHT U LOVED DADDY THOUGH!!"/
MOM: That mutha fucka...na u should support him...HIS UR BRO/

That had me bussin up laughin.
I'm givin this one to Mad Dog because i thought his verse was funnier