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SUPERVILLAIN vs. Mad Dog
the rules:
no crew votes. no dickriding votes. no hate votes. all votes must be explained. no recycled rhymes. no biting. 10-12 lines max. verses due tonight (now). you spit first. ..........i think that'll work. :shoot: mad dog, i would have preferred battling you without peeping your work (you vs. bigneks), sometimes i like the element of surprize, but you wanted an honest vote first, so you got one. since we already agreed to a battle beforehand, we're still gonna do it. come with your best shit. good luck guy.:shoot: s.v. |
Checkin in........................................
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chin check 1,2,1,2.
s.v. dangerous..........crhyme sindicate |
Opponents beware of this fake supervillan/
Offences include being a bitch...and actin feminine/ How the hell can u call me out...and expect to win/ U'll get squashed like a coke can...made of alluminum/ Ur rap aint a contest...bitches be pukin at them/ The only way u'll be sick...is if i give u food poisonin/ Ur best to no-show now...coz i dont label u a foe/ (foe = challenge) I guarentee u only spit best...when u choke/ Now let me give u an honest vote...just to make things clear/ I've already won this battle...ur response'll just kiss my rear/ Weak i aint even try but lets see wot u got... |
"watch me turn this dark knight into bright day.............follow me and you might need shades." - s.v. dangerous
(verse) mad dog...how can i blame you for your rage mutt?// you cute little thing...all bark and no bite, thats symptoms of a spayed pup,// rabid beast? or just jizm on the lips of this average freak?// im a savage king, ruling everything on this atlas, please call the sire, his majesty...// the only way that you could be even considered as hotter,// is if i put you on a 4 foot leash...6 feet from your dish of water,// (in the summer) i'll beat ya with a tail-pipe to a duelly, just to defeat you unusually,// its worth the jailtime and the ticket that i get for this animal cruelty...// dont feel brave, 'cuz you live up to your name and only chase pussies,// im not talkin' 'bout the nookie kind rookie, but r.b.'s famed wussies...// beware of the hollow-tips engraved with your name, pointed at your face in a loaded weapon,// just keep your fingers crossed and pray that today, all dogs get to go to heaven!!!// (ha! im the drunken master! this was just a quick freestyle appetizer to warm me up for the crew league entree. nice spittin' mad dog........now lets get these votes in playboy.) supervillain of the crhyme sindicate!!! |
v/ wack.
This was painful to read.. both verses were bad in different ways.. nothin flowed.. no decent concepts for punches.. very basic structures an rhyme schemes.. no quotables.. punch for punch you were both even.. but Villain gets this battle cos each of his punches were personal.. only weak name flips but at least they were typed specifically for his opponent.. Mad Dog jus` randomly typed horrible attempts at vague disses. v/ Villain. Vote on one of these or be bugged until you do: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121238 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122505 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685 |
thank you for that beautiful feedback my friend..........some day illtalic, i aspire to become as dope as you. (cough)
s.v. |
This was lopsided... My vote goes to Super...
Heres how i break it down SUPER - Better Punches, Better Rhyme, Better Flow MAD - You gatta elevate... aluminum doesnt rhyme with win, and supervillain doesnt rhyme with feminine. Just elevate and ull be better hopfully My vote goes to Super.... He took this one to the bank for sure. |
uppin' for more fair responses and votes my fellow battlecats!!!
much love powder. thanks for the honest vote cutty. ........once again, good try mad dog. keep on keeping on playboy. s.v.........c.s. |
aight but depend on how u say it uppin#1..........
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uppin# 1..........................................
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uppin' for honest votes!!!
..........supervillain the kingpin, c.s. |
uppin' for honest votes!!!
..........supervillain the kingpin, c.s. |
uppin' for honest votes!!!
..........supervillain the kingpin, c.s. |
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