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real thorough vs -untitled-
house rules apply.
im checkn in now so i'l spit first. try and drop yer shit before sunday. let the battle commence. :shoot: |
Checkin in bitch nigga bluffer, the disrespect was uncalled for though. But lets bump heads bitch.
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I'll drop soon, almost ready to fit it. You can drop when ever.
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ya need ta hurry up n battle doggies
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ur cremation starts like theatre rows filled wit faggots wit ya body *burnt* in sectionz of flames,
commencing ya pain... cuz strong'll kill -untitled- like arm's the resurrection of KAIN! disrespectin' ya name, cuz all ur shots are unseen like liquor 2 a drunk blind, and wit one rhyme strong'll fuck up Diss like wack rappers flubbing punchlines. (run time...) cuz arm'll shoot and drop Di 2 pavement quicker than a gambling man in craps, and completely disregard -untitled- like unequipped facilities for handicaps! cuz ur candy raps are like candy wraps *GARBAGE* attacked and left wit yo lips bust, cuz strong'll put in work and leave AB cut like exercising when performing sit-ups! spit tough? u wish that, cuz opening soda bottles is the only time u twist caps, and wit ur faggot ways like men pullin' trains on ya ass ableds anus redefines a Diss-track! |
Ayo you gone drop cuz or what I'm wait'n the people is also.
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real thorough , that rings a bell, must be you from cypher//
flamed yer ass with no disregard whatsoever, im a hater against this cleche rapper// nothing new here, another wack using drugs and guns to emphasise he's lacking ideas// 'rb' wants your head on a platter , your pollutin shit with no meaning whatsover// im a hater of your kind, keepin in mind im the superior one, and you'll find your race down in the gutter// your crew can also go with you, cuz da B.R.A.N.C.H'll 'snap' you in half muthafucka// not even wolverine can save you this time, he has nothing to do with your weak rhymes// in time you'll realise your just another wack mind that 'destructs his own lyrics'// my poison's acidic, immune to pain, i'l 'instruct this verse through your audio slits'// spits come out as hopless shits, not even the 'freedom of speech'll' help you speak// speak if you may but your spits wont allow your kids to play in the street// your umbilical cord's stored away cuz your real mom's 'certified'// i wouldnt blame the woman, your lyric's a sin, you should be crucified// another crucifiction'll take place after this battle, a 'jesus wannabe here's for sale'// 'tony' 'ill' and 'marvelous' left cuz you were a rip off cuz you'r too old an stale// your lyrics have failed you this time thorough, cuz i 'thoroughly' churned your windpipe// this apple's still on the branch, step down you faggot, your no way near ripe// |
I was feeling -untitled- on this one because he's right, most of Real Thorough's stuff didn't make sense. -Untiltled- has some lines that were pretty good, I especially liked:
"nothing new here, another wack using drugs and guns to emphasise he's lacking ideas// 'rb' wants your head on a platter , your pollutin shit with no meaning whatsover//" Even though he did say "whatsoever" in the line before. I like -untitled-'s punches better too. RT's punches weren't bad but nthing that really impressed me. Vote is for -untitled. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122743 |
uppin for votes. please...
wanna close this battle quick. |
yup, haha.........this is funny, lets just get these votes in
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C'mon yall uppin sor some votes here, damn favor will be returned. I'm good for it.
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real thorough wins this won...it was a close battle....both need major elevation....untitled your first few bars were WHACK but u got better after that but your bad start hurt u in this one.......real just outpunched u and his verse was more creative.....and his lines were a lot shorter.......
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121779
Okay untitiled had the better flow/structure.Creativity goes to untitlesa as well cause his shit seemed for original.Thorough,you had a nice wordplay in ur closer,nice similies which I liked,so I'll give you complexity.Now punches were excellent by both.But untitlied had shit that seemed to hit harder. Vote-Untitled(drop a vote in my battle) |
Aight, yall want punches??? Is that is, what about meta's then I got yall somebody set up a battle, or shit me and Untitled can go again.
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real, we can go again after this battles over. in the meantime... uppin for votes. XD
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