Real Thorough ~vs~R.A.M
 

10-20 lines
House rules!
Lets go young.

I'm checkin in, drop within the hour young. You know the rules.

I'll Stomp On R.A.M Till He Just A Diminutive Piece Of Sediment By Using-Hits-Of-Combustion-Layers !!..
You Finally Gonna Loose-To-Real, An-Why/R.A.M Is Getting Irritating Like Abusive-Questionaires !!.. (Uh Huh!)

Thorough Is Sick? Your A Mental-Bitch ,Call Me The Next Leniox Lewis Because My Punches Aint Gentle-Hits !!..
I'll Leave R.A.M Feelin Left Out Like Judgmental-Kids ,And Leave New York Torn Apart Like America Was Undergoing Continental-Drift !!.. DAMN!
I'll Send You To A Different State Like Shipment-Workers ,I'll Have You Bending Backwards Like Incosistent-Girders !!..
Driving Across The Boarder Is The Only Way This-Bitch-Gets-Further ,Its A Known Fact That I'll Kill Year Old Like Infant-Murders !!.. (YUP!)

Forget Kicking R.A.M's Ass-Later Because REAL Will Punch Out Kid Till He Cant Hold His Own Like Retarted-Masturbators !!..
I'll Serve You Big Time Like A Mass-Ive-Waiter ,No Wonder Why R.A.M Isn't Hot! Because Hes Way Past-The-Equator !!.. (OHH!!!)

R.A.M Your Dumb-Please-Parish ,Punches? I'll Stick It To Your Figure Like Clothes That Gumby's-Wearin !!..
I'll Gun-V's-Marriage To Rap, So Everyone Watch Me

I ain't know we had a battle but it's good.

Real Thorough whateva you featherweight faggot,
Talk a good one but your legs run like your mouth when theres havoc,
I'm dousin this bastard wit lyrical fluid hotter than acid,
Cuz his papa was absent and ain't tell him RAM was Thoroughly Real,
Nigga you couldn't touch if you was blind and i'm brail,
Settin up secret battles tryin to prevail,
Must be mistakin me for a nigga wit less than half of my skill,
You must of thought of it lookin in da mirror seein yourself,
And that's Real-Thorough I am and that's TRU,
This nigga da opposite phony cowardly dude,
Sayin he gon' stomp on ram and ain't got tha power to,
And homie vocab is just a small part of battleing,
Tha punches was straight but it ain't flow wit no talent,

Come on let's keep it real you though you'd flow thru me wit ease,
Thought your shit was hotter than grits and chicken grese?
Ram ain't hot he's way past the equator,
But i'm standin tall like maximus tha last gladiator.


-Yo when did you set this up anyway cuz?

uppin this battle Folks don't sleep
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Real Thorough for sure
he had better flow, and Vocab
so without a doubt, Real Thorough
Vote - Real Thorough

A'ight...this was a pretty weak battle...Real, you had some nice punches, multies were a lil' off...your structure was wack, it was hard to read...but your punches were pretty creative. Ram, you got some potentail but your verse was pretty wack...your lines didn't rhyme that good dawg...elevate.

Vote- Real

don't sleep on this one folks.
If you ain't feelin sumthin i said let it be known i'm up for da criticism

OMFG
Real
your bars were strectched to shit
dont ever again make your lines that long
the only reason you won was because R.A.M. didnt have any punches
thats what you need to win battles R.A.M.
Punches
and you didnt really have any
atleast your bars was short
thats good, but you need more than that to win a battle
v/real

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123431
hit that up

real!! taht all i got to say real
real hard
real good punches
real good personals
real good flow
real good style
real wins
ram was good to i like it but not as much as real's shit

can we get this battle closed out please people It's been open a little too long.

Thats basically all it is to say.
real hard
real good punches
real good personals
real good flow
real good style
real wins
ram was good to i like it but not as much as real's shit
v/real

Yea I have to go with it too......Real through
had some nice word play....Also the structure
was a slight off but nice vocab and stuff..
Work on similies

RAm your was nice to but work on punches more
Structure was better.....I liked the metas But work on some
more stuff
v/Real

oops I voted for the wrong person....Tell a mod or something to change it aight