Shadows edge__vs__Casual
 

10 lines.

Due Sunday.

House Rules.

Czech.

You = illtalic? if so sten cell also wants to battle... so after this take that. i got a final to do now so i wont be able to spit till tonight or maybe tomorrow if i go out drinking or some shit.

I`ll get to him later.

As long as you post by Sunday.

I left MM.. but let`s do this anyhow.

Ok.. Casual you ain't on.. I'll drop when you do, but I'm really busy right now so I don't want to do it tonight if I don't have to.

You are cut. Even my rhyme scheme is more elevated than you. Check it:

Man…casual, illtalic, tek… kid looking for triple the fame
You just a wreck….
I won this battle from “Czech”… so victory foreign to this no-name
Kid can't touch my fucking crew. Catch-22... straight to the head
Shit's overdue....
This kid too afraid to drop a clue, ashamed of reveal the life he led
Such a herb even his profile dispersed... see he 40 and lack a wife...
Pain getting worse...
Kid take a look at your verse… only your ego is larger than life
And on the topic of size… his girl need all Adams ribs to construct her
This kid just realized…
And don’t feign surprise, that I’m even better at your whack structure
Listing your aliases is counting squares, so drop the rhyming n sit
Play the numbers, but beware...
Your careers a list of squares, which is why there's no prime in it


And if you guys don't understand something, especially the last line, don't vote. Or whatever... at least hopefully someone will get it.

Oh and someone vote on my battle with marv on EFL, it's 4-1 me...

There`s buncha ways to eat, beat an defeat this clown
Shadow`s mumblin`
Headphone`s crumblin`.. so i silence ya.. by turnin` the volume down
Let you suffer in silence.. for the record ya muted
Lesson`s taught
Track career`s cut short.. an wrecked.. before it fuckin` started
I`m the truth.. so face facts.. H.M`s a wack crew
Nothin` but imposters
An that roster? A who`s-who of who-the fuck-are-you?!
Now i see you want in on my crew.. kid don`t be absurd
I hand you abuse
That wack façade`s no use.. i`m jackin` the win.. so H.M`s never heard
An i stay sonnin` ya kid.. til i disperse the darkness
Total eclipse
Shadow`s pissed.. i`d edge him out.. but he was never in this.

Haha... nice closer. My rhyme scheme still sonned yours :cool: :p

upping for votes

aight

Casual

good verse till the middle the flow got all fucked up in it your punches where bomb... every thing else was good except for that shit in the middle it fucked you up

shadows edge..

aight hotness your verse stayed good throughout the entire thing and punches kep hitting hard.. and you stayed with good flow

ok seeing how you two have the same style and came wit da same punches i'm have to give this one to shadow cuz causal fucked up in da middle

vote shadows edge

HIT UP MY BATTLE WIT PHAT MIC

What exactly `fucked it up`?

Sway again Shadow...

You honestly call that swaying?? I even put the >> ":p" << in there. Fuck off, might as well say "I win!" is swaying. I said your closer was tight.. is that like negative swaying?

upping...

Wow 1 vote in 5 days. Super

Casual & shadow
You had an overall good verse both of you and your stills were fimular i think you both had equal vocab but shadows were more creative you`re punches were both decent i cant see who punched more but im going with
Shadow.

Vote on my battle vs AComp
the pair of you.

^^^ notta bad job swaying m...