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Terumoto 05-07-04 07:32 AM

One-Man-Band vs Gambino
 
Aight heres how it goes..

no line limit, but not too long

5 votes wins
3-0 is knockout
min posts for voting is 20

votes need explination

DQ within 3 days if u dont spit

ill spit first

Terumoto 05-07-04 09:23 AM

Yo..

Gam, man, thats a pretty impressive number that you boastin/
almost 500 hundred posts but we all know u get by by freespostin/
Everyday I keep wonderin more and more/
about how u a middle weight when ya membership time is so small/
You have so many posts and i have barely any at all/
but is it just me or did we both join in march 2K4?/*

The times you do rap you do crap thats highly hypocritical/
You acccuse others bout talkin too gangsta, showerin with diss an ridicule/
but wait just a minute,-you call them pitiful when in actuality you did-it-too?/**
My vision of you, is a kid with an attitude... a spoilt mamas boy that probly paid to be-in rappin school/
while thinkin you gangsta, you come home before 8 and textcee, so ya mom dont get mad-at-you/**
always talk about guns in ya rhymes, but Ya clicks inexperienced that crhyme syndicate is young, fallin behind, the first family of crime/***
Get with the times... I'll level your rhymes.../
even the band vs whole crew, Your shit wouldnt even come close to mine/

*read his posts no., read mine, you'll get it...
**in some previous battles he always talks bout others trying to be gangsta when he does himself... talking about all the 4.4.s and shit u know
***Thats a diss to his crew... read his sig when he posts... but by this i mean no disrespect... its tight crew and i actually want to join if i can at some stage...

but yeah peace...

hit me up with your verse, gam

Gambino 05-07-04 08:45 PM

whats good.........


hey yo dog i'm about to merc you........so now i guess its time to//
and yeah you the one man band........but puffy forgot to sign you//

hey pick the slack up......i'm elevated.....your rhymes trina catch up//
cause one of your lines is five words and the next doesnt match up//

see he's in a band.......and he's white........but he tries to act black//
so he reminds me of linkin' park with that white guy that tries to rap//

I dont even have to rap anymore........cause the first three bars did it//
plus we only look at his verse cause he decerated with stars when he spit it//
*****^^^
this bitch wants to be in C.S.........so he's always lookin' over my shoulder//
so his initiation is to hold my piss cup.........when my P.O. comes over//

thats all i got to say so holla........

Gambino 05-08-04 01:47 AM

uppin............................................. ....

Gambino 05-08-04 04:22 AM

vote and i'll return the favor.......................

Mad Dog 05-08-04 05:51 AM

Good battle both of ya's...its really tough both of u were good both had equally good punches, personals. The structure in both cats was tight as fuck too. Man its reall y hard but ima have to vote 4 1 man band coz he threw in a good multy and i didnt really see that in Gambinos verse

Gambino: 7.9/10
1 Man band: 7.91/10

V/1 Man Band

Sorry but it WAS real close to me

Terumoto 05-08-04 06:20 AM

omg shit sorry man... is it two verses???? should have specified the rules better... ... ... ... .... u wanna drop another verse????? if not dw bout it... just ignore my other one.. could influence noob voters though..

peace

Gambino 05-08-04 02:38 PM

nope second verde doesnt count.............

i dont feel like doin an extra battle for no reason..........

so for everyone that votes his second verse doesnt count............

Terumoto 05-08-04 06:23 PM

aight its deleted anyway....................................

bring the votes


peace

K-Trin 05-08-04 06:36 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121779
^^ vote

Okay,I didn't find either verses hot.Flow was ok by both of you.But the thing I hated about ur verse,ONe-Man-Band,is that your first 6 lines seemed like you were telling a story about Gambino and not a rap battle.I gotta give this to Gambino.He actually had me feeling like I was reading a rap,and not a story.

Vote-Gambino(drop a vote in my battle)

Gambino 05-09-04 02:39 AM

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^...................... ....

Darrk 05-09-04 02:45 AM

Both Verses had Nice flows. n rhymes but my opnion Gambino made it short and sweet...

V/Gambino

Darrk 05-09-04 02:57 AM

Better Explained.. One man Band started off good.. but than later talking bout his crew n diss'em.. but at the same time wanting to join'em..? Good Punchlines n flow.. but that in my opinion juss killed it.


Gambino's Victory Lines-see he's in a band.......and he's white........but he tries to act black//
so he reminds me of linkin' park with that white guy that tries to rap//

And -this bitch wants to be in C.S.........so he's always lookin' over my shoulder//
so his initiation is to hold my piss cup.........when my P.O. comes over//

Gambino 05-09-04 03:51 AM

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^

Gambino 05-09-04 05:45 AM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


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