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Sten. Cell 05-07-04 04:04 PM

Sten. Cell Vs. Triple_N (Rd. 2)
 
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Triple_N 05-07-04 04:07 PM

nah lets do blind spit now, 30 mins to drop holla back!!!

Sten. Cell 05-08-04 03:25 PM

Check Check
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Ill Drop Soon..

Triple_N 05-09-04 12:11 AM

check in, when you gon drop^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Sten. Cell 05-17-04 12:35 AM

No Need To Cover Your Neck Unless Your Wearin A Bib/
Kid Ill Make Ya Shit Split In The Middle Like The Words In My Sig/
You Could Rep The South But Bein "Dirty" Is Bad..../
Plus My Scripts'll Tell You That Ill Hose Ya Grill Like A Car Wash Ad/
Fuck A Gat Kid,Talkin Guns Has Become Just A Fad..../
But Even Vests Wont Cover Ya Joints Like Faulty Elbow Pads/
Knowledgeable Vet?Come On Kid Your Hardly A Grad..../
Plus Ya Cant Get To The Point Like Usin Dirty Mouse Pads/
Coming To A Close,I Dont Mean To End This So Fast.../
But In The Middle Triple Nearly Ends In A Dash/(_)...Get It?

Triple_N 05-17-04 01:07 AM

This is a crime, its gon go down in history as greatest rippin' of all time
Cuz fact is even if u was "Theodore Roosevelt" u wouldn't drop a dime
He claims he's from jersey, all the talent from there, then u what a pity
U rep jersey's wack commity, ya punches like a b-ball game "brick city"
Eat bitches like microwaveable lunches, ya rhyme's are loose try a crunches
Cuz even if u ya name was "Dow Jones" u still wouldn't "stock" no punches
It took 2 weeks for u to rehearse ya verse, u need aid call the nurse
Well I'm a call u "cassidy reverse" cuz it don't get "no worse"
Man, ya rhymes so nursery that I could drink them wit a sippy cup
Cuz u so garbage the "sanition crew" wouldn't even "pick u up"

I wanted to drop hard but didn't want to waste my time, Holla!!!!!

Sten. Cell 05-17-04 11:07 AM

Rise.
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Sten. Cell 05-17-04 10:23 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sten. Cell
Rise.
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Again...

Restricted 05-17-04 10:35 PM

Aiyo..I Think Sten.Cell Took This One But A LiL BIt...

I Just Liked StenCells Structure and Metaphors More Than I Liked TripleNs. Punches Were Nice From Both Sides, No Real Personals, Except In Triples Verse But They Werent Hard.....Flow Was Nice In Stens's Shit......

Nice Drops You Two, Props.

Vote - Sten Cell

~R~

*PLEASE HIT UP MY TWO BATTLES IN MY SIGNATURE!!!!*

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-18-04 01:18 AM

Sten-cell some shit didint even make sence good flow structure but i beleave punches where off

Triple_N dogg people Be LAckin on ur skill shit ur flow was hott the rhymes n shit Best Rhymes out of both: He claims he's from jersey, all the talent from there, then u what a pity
U rep jersey's wack commity, ya punches like a b-ball game "brick city"

Break Down

sten Cell

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
sTructure 6/10
Punches 7/10
28/40

Triple_N

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 9/10
32/40

Good battle Vets

Willa 05-18-04 01:19 AM

ok both were wack and lacked effort
333 good structure and flow work on multis vocab and personals

sten good flow nad ok punches work on structure vocab personals and multis
i think 333 won he had better structure vocab and i think his punches hit alot harder

Sten. Cell 05-18-04 03:33 PM

Didnt Make Sense.Your Kidding Me.
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[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-19-04 04:56 PM

Checckity Checck Checck

Break Down For

Sten Cell.

No Need To Cover Your Neck Unless Your Wearin A Bib/
Kid Ill Make Ya Shit Split In The Middle Like The Words In My Sig/
^*Safe Opener* Could Have Been Better But' .. Its Cool.. 7/10

You Could Rep The South But Bein "Dirty" Is Bad..../
Plus My Scripts'll Tell You That Ill Hose Ya Grill Like A Car Wash Ad/
^Aint Feeling It' ... 4/10

Fuck A Gat Kid,Talkin Guns Has Become Just A Fad..../
But Even Vests Wont Cover Ya Joints Like Faulty Elbow Pads/
^Aiight But Punch Wasnt Connected' .... 6/10

Coming To A Close,I Dont Mean To End This So Fast.../
But In The Middle Triple Nearly Ends In A Dash/(_)...Get It?
^Wasnt' That Bad But Wasnt Anything.. Great... 7/10


Breack Down For

Triple_N:

This is a crime, its gon go down in history as greatest rippin' of all time
Cuz fact is even if u was "Theodore Roosevelt" u wouldn't drop a dime
^Alright Opener' ..!! Nice Use Of Multies' ... 8/10

Eat bitches like microwaveable lunches, ya rhyme's are loose try a crunches
Cuz even if u ya name was "Dow Jones" u still wouldn't "stock" no punches
^Nice Punch'Line's..!! Im Feelin It 10/10 ....!!! 'Prolly Best One in Your Verse/Flow

It took 2 weeks for u to rehearse ya verse, u need aid call the nurse
Well I'm a call u "cassidy reverse" cuz it don't get "no worse"
^Again Nice Use Of Multies' .... 8/10

Man, ya rhymes so nursery that I could drink them wit a sippy cup
Cuz u so garbage the "sanition crew" wouldn't even "pick u up"
^'Could Of Broke 'Em Off With The Closer' .. 8/10 ..!!!!


Vote: Triple_N .. Just For The Fact That He Came With Harder Punches' ..!!!!

L.I. 05-19-04 05:04 PM

sten - okay a couple of your bars were hot...but your closer and the pads bar was def not....u cant say 'this closer' or stuff like that in ur closer....but good flow and multi's....no really good personals in ur verse.....okay meta's.....jus werk on using personals and better meta's....give ur verse a 6.9/10....

triple - u had way better meta's....lose the " " around ur werds....no personals....so werk on that....better punches.....same on the flow....but ur verse was better.....u had more complexity and sustainment.....good spit....give ur verse a 8.3/10.....

Vote - triple

EyeDEA 05-19-04 07:58 PM

You guys didnt come through as hard as i thought u would but Triple N you got the edge on the punches though and good metaphors nice stucture and pretty easy to read and usderstand............keep elvatin overall i give you a 7/10

Sten cell you had a good structure but the punches werent that personal and were kinda weak and not thourough but it was an ok battle though juss work on harder punches and you'll get the vote keep elevatin though.................overall i give you a 6/10

VOTE= TRIPLE N


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