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Sac King vs. Whitey313
aight i set it up so you spit,,....
dont be a chump.... |
no pre writtin shit
no crew votes and i aint funna do dat murder you shit cuz i aint kno u so imma flow aight den |
yo ok when we post by and u go first ight..............
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I be in dis as i speak freak da beat sac king is so unique
i blow more green den tiger woods got unda his cleet you should undastand how my composition sound so amazin' competitions on rb settin a demo like they was fundraisin' i snatch mics smack mics stands wit backhands i hit you wit a hook so you can really undastand grace dis page i cant let me go to rage and all i got is my thoughts whitey313 and shit i aint lettin dis go to waste I'll lace dis page wit motion bitch open yo eyes so u can find my devotion your a ROOKIE who aint got shit to say thats why youzza fagit who aint even get no 4-play i murder you with my lyrical and verbals killings commin out like a pistol instead of lead shillings i aint even flyweight but i drop like im heavy i have yo ass mimicin and have yo mind empty i aint even gotta do no more dis will beat him...haha |
ok here im spittin
Attackin~herbs smackin you wit my sick~sick~verbs/ Screwing~pervs doing tounge2tounge action makin~it~curve/ Pushin~and~pullin PrimoX plugs, tossin~slugs at this bitch~ass~thug/ Crackin~shoulders makin them 'shrug' while im steppin on Eternal like a 'fuckin~bug'/ All you do is ask 'why' because i killed you in a 'lullaby' and when u found out, all u did is 'cry'/ Dawg i got you 'HOOKED' by my rap skill like i put a fuckin curse on you/ Got you 'BOOKED' like an old library book, and that is true/ Once you read this shit, you gon get 'SHOOKED' like a bumpy ass car ride/ Im the center of attention, made you 'LOOKED' like i got a blue cap with an orange bill stride/ Nigga you just got 'TOOKED' of the best ride in yo lifetime, to crush yo pride/ Open casket, dead bodies flowin, bloody arms and legs, and PrimoX shit is showin/ I'll make you pop viagra pills like its all good to make your dick keep growin/ Thats if u really have 1, cuz all yo girls dumped you for havin a small *One Who Doesn't Leave the House a Lot*/ I got all yo bitches bustin my balls wit they tounges and still i fucked and shanked her/ Makin you all pissed cuz i gave yo girlfriend a taste, twist and twirl/ |
ight first 1 to 3 votes win ight..................... :shoot: :shoot: :thefinger
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aight check it:
Sac king: i think you cam a lil harder han whitey did ya feel...coz ur punches hit harder than his...and i was feelin ya verse.. but you need personals... whitey... you need to elevate dogg...i see potential but you need to step it up a notch aight...and ge that dumb shit outta ya sig v/sac king |
Aight Aight Nice Battle
Sac King U Had Nice Punches Homie Nice// Whitey U Had Good Flowz// Work On Yo Punches Homie// U Had Punches In Der But U Need To Hit Harder// Vote-sac King |
dawg i look at your shit cause i'ma whitey but i can't stand ~ shit or the breaks you put in dat shit. and get off shady's dick white baster and fuck this battle sac king won. i liked the flow and the punch. whitey it was that battle but guit that ~ and breaking shit.
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Sac King-Had some stretched lines in there.I wasn't feeling punches.All-in-All,ur verse was somewhat boring.
Best Line-i murder you with my lyrical and verbals killings commin out like a pistol instead of lead shillings Worst line-too much to choose Whitey-I liked ur verse way better.Nice wordplay,flow,and punches. Best line-Got you 'BOOKED' like an old library book, and that is true/ Once you read this shit, you gon get 'SHOOKED' like a bumpy ass car ride/ Worst Line-I got all yo bitches bustin my balls wit they tounges and still i fucked and shanked her/ Makin you all pissed cuz i gave yo girlfriend a taste, twist and twirl/ Overall-Both of you were complex and creative.But Whitey's verse seemed better.Sac,next time try to add wordplay and imagery. Vote-Whitey http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123107 ^^^^^^drop a vote in my battle |
This was a pretty decent battle props to both of you. Sac King you overall came a bit harder perhaps you've had more battles under your belt or what. Both had decent punches but whitey yours were a bit underdeveloped. A bit better flow as well, whitey work on yoru flow it enhances your punches, keep elivating
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vote goes 2 Sac king..
Structure: sac king Flow:sac king Punches: sac king Yo whitey u focused on it bein long...u need 2 elevate alot yo keep practicin doe u can get bettah iight ~1~ 2 all |
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