quick freestyle
 

im a phsyco mother fucker like marylin manson/
u gonna be fucked with and there wont be no ransom/
why am i rappen? i guess eminem influenced/
planned to kill a mother fucker wit my blue-prints/
only problem is i cant find the mother fucken shit/
maybe some day when im not hight for a moment ill make a hit/
maybe one day ill at least not be hight for a moment/
im a drug addict, even take glue to get me high, wont-it?/
seems every second a got an erection/
cant have sex though cuz i got an infection!/
my life obviously aint got no direction/
why do i always gots to have a boner?/
masturbatin wit a fuckin lotion toner/
only problem is i aint the owner/
gettin high cuz basicly im a mother fuckin stoner/
my bodys fucked up, i dont think ill be able to be an organ-doner/
im gettin bored cuz im always sore-in-boner/
slappin bitches cuz i got a dirty conscience/
shootin people if they look at me, i got the wrong-sense/
im as sick as a preist doin molestation/
if u wanna hear me sing then go to the next orchestration/
but if u want to see me rappin then go to the party/
thats where i get high and drunk by sippin mah-bacardi/

jus some thing i felt like rappin...haha...nuthin serious

uppin for some more replys...rate it people

this wasnt bad, but it wasnt all that great either
right now
before you start to elevate
make raps with some good content
meaning rap about something other than killing
rap about a plot, and have a meaning
after you do that
then drop
peace

yea i was jus freestylin and shit

(so much anger) WELL like Kryogenix Said u didn't really have a "story line" u just went on...however i liked some of ur rhymes...and it was a good for a quickie *one*

SB

well most freestyles dont have a "story line"...if u know what i mean.