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Darrk 05-08-04 01:55 AM

Toxic Vs Darrk
 
Go ahead

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-08-04 02:10 AM

Aight Check Check (30 Min Has Started)

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-08-04 02:11 AM

O Damn Man Whats Da Fuckin Rules//

10 To 20 Lines
No D/r Votes
No Crew Votes
No Unexplain Votes
No Feeding Each Otha Rhymes

Darrk 05-08-04 02:27 AM

Toxic u really wanna go against the Darrk Master? People see me as a Dino, A.K.A. a, "Darrk Raptor" My SOul is Darrk and cruel as can be, my heart has Ice, I'll freeze Toxic you'll see, I Plant my Darkness every where I be.. it Grows like a Seed.. I'm Addictive like Weed. Or Like Drinking an "Old E". ni66a please.. I'm a Grim Reaper, Late night Creeper,Take yo Bitch, i'll Keeep her, While Carrying a Heat Seeker. i told you i'm From that COunty of DADE.. if u dont know what it is It's MIA. we in this Dirty south bitch n we Pour it up, Late night party's Fuck a Club.. Fuck a Scrub, out here we ride on Dubs, Or 20 Inch Spokes Spinner's. they show us Love.

LOL its 2 am, if i lose i'll get a rematch..

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-08-04 02:29 AM

Im holdin da OOZIE, poppin shots at dis NEWBIE, I hit where his SHOES BE, havin da neighbors doin dere job by bein all NOOSY//(1) I know you cant beat me so PROVE ME WRONG, study your eminem cd and sing me a GROUPIE SONG//(2) im da hottest thing on da street since 5 dolla CRACK~BAGS, I SMACK~FAGS den pull out da BLACK~MAG and hit em wit shots to make his BACK~SAG(3) imma chew you like TABACCO den SMACK~HOES and leave em wit TAGGED~TOES, dont try to ACT~BOLD or FLASH~DOE cuz da FACTS~TOLD dat you tried to flash heat when da GATS~COLD, this CAT~FOLDS under da pressure cuz he cant handle da FAT~ROLL of SMASHED~GOLD dat I stole when I PASSED~GO, you ASSHOLE!(4) I INTENSE~FEAR in DENSE~EARS, I write wit a pencil cuz my PENS~SMEARS flip sips on TEN~BEERS and THEN~HEARS dat his mother got hit by a GOLD~SEDAN dat ROAST~HER~HAND and that could only mean dat it wuz DA POST~UHH~MAN(5) all you hear wuz SILENCE cuz I related to VILOENCE heres a DIME~KID go buy ya self a PRIME~RIB, hand me da FINE~WHIP cuz rap iz MY~SHIT, do me wrong and dere iz gonna be some physical SCIENCE(6) so you make me cock back da EAGLE and put bullets through ya PEOPLE and make ya chest SEE~THROUGH to watch da blood LEAK TOO. fuck it, I show flip no respect like BLOCKED~CALLS, now im out dis bitch like a fat kid in DODGE~BALL....//

HERES A WARNING// DONT COME AGAINST ME// IF U DO im gunna cut u deep and clean,
hoverin above u with my sergically inhanced insturments as i remove ur spleen,
ill keep u alive on a resperater and drugs so to make shure u can keep feelin the pain,
ill even have a split screen tv infront of u so u can see urself screamin in agoney,

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-08-04 02:31 AM

Lol Aight// We Can Have A Rematch If U Lose//

Raphael 05-08-04 02:52 AM

aight check it:

darrk: dogg just like i said in ur other battle u need to elevate aight...you need to work on the flow, structure, and punches. punches win the battle aight...keep elevating dogg..

toxic: you were overall better in most of the catagories and thats what got you the win...

v/toxic

Raphael 05-08-04 02:56 AM

return da favor

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-08-04 02:57 AM

Dont Vote On Dis Battle Dont Vote I Repeat Dont Vote

lyrical distruction 05-19-04 11:18 AM

xx had more better verse plus he extended it. He seemed to have the better performance with his punches multies and word play. Seemed to rhyme well and beat darrk easerly. Im gonna have to give the vote to x good spit both of yas.

LyricalMethod 05-19-04 11:48 AM

to toxic: you spit mad lines yo. i almost didn't want to read it when i clicked onthis battle. anyway nice ass punches and multiples. you should tighten your structure up alot, b/c its like readin an essay dawg. overall nice verse.

darrk: your verse was weak, you need to tighten your punches and personals up. stop talkin about your self so much and maybe you can win. when you ge t tot he level where you're really good you can boast on yourself. aight step it up son.

vote=toxic

kEtCh~22 05-19-04 12:01 PM

Dark-Didn't come Hard enough with word play & Punches.. flow could been a lil betta too..

Toxic- i liked ya flow much..on point..good multi's at times..don't sacrifice content for flow tho..only happened like once tho..

V/toxic

-O- 05-19-04 06:09 PM

Yo,....Dark- I wasnt really feelin ya structure, your punches didnt really do anything for me either, if you work on those then you will elevate....think out your punches better...

Toxic....got the better of the battle, long ass verse...better structure, punches, multi's....this was def a one sided battle.....
good job to both...

Vote = Toxic

****I got an audio battle that needs some REAL voters....its -O- Vs SenseR......... the link wouldnt work...

pz


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