Cesus Jhist vs -untitled-
 

usual rules
no wackness
due whenever cuz its late
blind

che...

checkin in:


the calculator your using is outta batteries//
your style is commercial you were made from factories//
tractors pull you against the lawn and you graze with ease//
your skins white, so you must have the 'wack rappin disease'//
this guys already threatnin wid guns and shit, even his name thinks he's every1's 'savior'//
this guy's a hoax, his old folks wont reckognise him after i slit his throat with my lyrical razors//
the evidence you give me is that your new to rb, but can this guy rap clean?//
the residence who relieve me is your mommy, 'jesus christ' someone cut his spleen//
your hypocracy'll backfire down your egoistic self, the nails should of been deeper//
why did he die?, this mistake should repent the sins , by all means kill yourself, it'll do us a favour//


i went easy on ya. lol

lmao, you serious?

ever heard of biggie and pacs fait...fuck them, ima make him deader
his document isnt swept, its blank...couldnt even make it to the header
shit...
his rhymes drown on dry land...his only boxing is duckin, watchim ignore
but how could he have cold feet...when untitled didnt even get to shore?
jesus christ...woops thats me...just flip it around, youll like it more
destined to be wack, look at his birthday...now thats a 10/4...
When he created his own image, he knew hed die...no other predicion rivaled
flat lines on both sides, but no one remembers him...he was always untitled

...bwahha, w/e

DAMN
Who the hell are you?
its like talkin on the phone to a familar voice
that you just cant put your finger on
are you..T West?

anyway vote Cesus
why?
he fuckin SONNED him
best punch was prolly the cold feet one
Untitled came weak, as suspected
v/Cesus

no comment..............................its just i thought that untitled was good...oh well looks like this guys first loss will be by me....but when i get a chance aight "tuff guy

lol... not bad.. now.. for the votins. cummon ppl, you'll probably win this one cuz i just woke up. XD

votins please...

^^lmao

sorry, but until you can give me a breakdown of what that simple verse I just posted, you will not be winning anything...

that was directed towards the freepostin whore Lyrical

couldnt say that was cunstructive. could you?

wuteva...ill vote for you coz of the statistics of this battle...but u will still get ur first loss from me....

untitled:
flow:5/10
wordplay:5/10
vocab:4/10
punches:3/10
Creativity:4/10
Opener:5/10
Closer:5/10
Overall:does it matter

Comment:none

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'Tuff guy:
flow:6.5/10
wordplay:7/10
vocab:7/10
punches:6/10
Creativity:8/10
Opener:5/10
Closer:7/10
Overall: does it matter

Comment:none

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v/ 'tuff guy

Well, you just earned yourself a sonning.

One second.

i said ill take a RAINCHECK ever been to hollywood video...ha...that means ill battle you later for sure

Well, besides the fact that you "t"y_pE -- Li"k"e THI*S//!!1, and that you post "Respectible losses/wins, AND the score of the match...

Besides all of that, you suck at battling, now lemme break it down for you.



Im bout to test ur “Murderous Methods” nobility//--1
And at the same time prove my deadly versatility//--2
self glorification. No punch. Anyone can say, "Its the new fad//Im bad//" Also, it had no metaphore, no cliche, no wordplay, AND was ended with "//'s" at the end...
Im an intelligent vigilant that no one can suppress//--3
But for you it aint the same, how can a “mask be Murderous”//--4
Ok, first off, Murderous and suppress dont rhyme...You attempted a punch but failed horribly. Also, you try and make things stand out. People aren't stupid, or its just so rediciously far-fetched from the battle, that it makes no sence.
How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5
Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6
Again with the quotations...another weak attempt at a punch. You show no complexity at ALL. None, nothing.
Ur verse is like “love letters” coz all they do is “miss me”//--7
Dis battle is “uneven” like the eyes of “Shannon Doherty”//--8<<ScareTactics
Dont explain things...
You couldn’t be “hot even if you were Satans right-hand-devil//--9
Even then you would be “too far south” to be anywhere near my level//--10
Not a punch, another self glorification line.
You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11
You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12
Ok, your using quotaions on words, but they don't relate to anything, not even the other quoted words...
im rippen this pussy, leavin him wet wit some diseases//--13
after this battle he will be banished like the jews did jesus//--14
...your only attempt at a punch that skidded a hair on his right sideburn. Very weak and uncreative. Played played played...
listen kid, im not ur average vet, im invunerable against ur "D/R tactics"//--15
you couldnt drop shit if you were taking hits of "profolactics"//--16<<E-lax
no...

So, You have no metas, no cliches, no wordplay, and no personals. Not to mention no punches. So that leaves you with what? No structure because you had lines and quotes everywhere...my eyes hurt now... You had a few mis-placed multies and they actualy made it worse...so you dont get that. You have nothing.


You have been sonned! :thumbup:

Good day.

jeez...well thats from ur perspective...and right now i dont really care what you think....and i signed in the tourney just to give you 2 losses instead of 1