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WhiteBoi217 05-08-04 02:35 PM

Funny shit FEED BACK
 
I'm big like Africa your small like Luxenburg/
your like the chunks of corn when I drop a turd/
I'm like a California earthquake/
I make the ground shake/
Esspecialy when I chase a birthday cake/
I'm Hardcore, I'm magic like Harry Potter/
You can call me Dumbledore 'cuz Hogwartz is my almamater/
Your a jew I'll burn you in a fire/
A fire so hot it makes Satan perspire/
Call me Rebok 'cuz I'm going above the rim/
Call me the reaper 'cuz your futures lokking grim/
I'm a drugie I just bought an ounce/
All women love me cuz im black where it counts/
I can get you drugs and guns so you can call me the mob/
I'm eating every thing in my path so you can call me the blob/
I'm hungry I think I'll eat a snack/
And when I'm done with that I'll go take a crap/
I spit verses when I'm high at school/
I got your bitch lookin at my cock and starting to drool/
I'm french I say arivoir to you/
And now that I am through your gonna hate me too/


By: Deleon
and: WhiteBoi217

young beezy 05-09-04 01:22 AM

i liked the verse a lil but the jew joke was kinda mean, on ya sig u say ya better than em but..... u got a long ways to go b4 u on his level, u need to work on ya vocab and structure, ya thread says this was funny but there was no punches, overall i give u a 5/10

DeLeon 05-15-04 03:17 PM

its not suppose to be a diss dogg just clowning around on this

BuFu ThA mAn 05-15-04 03:40 PM

that was hot yo...everybody read my "first time peep it and leave some feedback!!!" shit..ight


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