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Real Thorough vs Whitey313
You know the rules.
Spit what you gone spit. Drop within a hour. |
Checkin in and will drop within this hour, what about you?
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Have Ya Face Crimson-Full When I Bash Ya Brains With No Interval/
You Must Be A ‘Grandfathers Clock’ Cuz Im beating You ‘Digtal/ My Raps Stay Subliminal When I Got [ D.A On The Look Out ] More Then Missing Criminals!// (DA= Detective Agency) Im the Type To Lift Up Your Spirit, Cut Ya Support, And Drop-It!/ Block-Kids, Show ‘Chemistry’ When I Pour Acid In Your Eyeball Sockets!/ ‘Isolate Ya Life’ n have My Fists [ Enclose Your Heart ] Like A Personal Locket!!// Slaughter You n Kill Your Legacy, Wait Nvm, That’s Wat You Beg-To-Be!/ Brake Ya Ankles n Make Sure Ya Legs-Will-Bleed Then Will [ Kick Your Stomach In ] Like Having External Pregnancies!!// Hits Shatter n Bruise-Ya-Spine!/ White Stays Like ‘Depressed Alcoholics’ , The Type To ‘Lose-An-‘Wine’/ My Hollow Tips Are Like [ Day Dreaming Iron Workers ] I Puts The Metal Thru-ya-Mind!// This Kid Couldn’t “Surface To iLLness” If He “Contracted-The-Bends!”/ * Crackin-Ya Lenz, 313 cant Function Correctly When Real [Inverses His Nervous System] And Really Turns His Back-On-His-Friends!// |
AIGHT FIRST OF ALL FUCK THE RAPMONSTA//
YOU EINT A GANSTA RAP KILLA YOU'RE A FUCKIN IMPOSTOR// YALL SHOULD TAKE A NAP CAUSE YOU FAKE RAPERS ARE WACK// YALL COULDN'T FEEL ME IF I WAS STANDIN RIGHT ON TOP OF YOUR BACK// I EINT BLACK IM BROWN FUCK THAT SHIT YALL CANT HOLD ME DOWN// CAN'T YOU FEEL THE RISE OF MY WATER YOUR GONA CHOKE WHEN YOU DROWN// AND OUT TO DOUBLE TIME// FUCK YOU NIGGA YOU CAN'T SHINE// FEEL THE FRICTION OF MY GRIND// PROCEED TO SHINE AND BLIND DEDICATED TO MY RHYMES// TOP DOWN SHOWIN SPINE TAKIN OVER SHOW IS MINE// DOUBLETIME YOU'RE WACK SON// ILL REARANGE YOUR FACE LIKE MICHAEL JAKSON// im no fuckin nigga, fuck that spic, now lay the fuck down and suck my dick. im a whiteman, you should know, even hos at ya shows cant feel the flow, i guess im back on top fukin spic, guess all your are now is a fukin prik. |
uppin votes pl vote~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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"The Rah"
Yo What the F was that?! Could somebody call the real emcee's cause so far I have done nothing but read wackness from everybody. But somebodies gotta win and it should be REAL THOROUGH! Work on yo battle though hommy Reason: His flow was way better than that other guy and he had a hell-a-lot more punches than WHITE too! Both of ya'll need to work on the flow although WHITE had better presentation of his flow. Good job guy! |
hold up, is this a minor league battle or what? both of your flows are as wack as wack, dwag both of you need 2 work on ya vocab cauze then don't battle until then but, one' gotta win... opener: whitey (so bad i wouldn't read da rest of it but waz better than da other) blows: whitey (wack but better than thorough) flow: whitey (it'll be way good if it had great blows) lyricism: whitey (understandable but basic) finisher: none and da winner is... WHITEY try harder nex time!!! vote back on my battles... it'll b appreciated!!! |
Yooooooooooo Dis Go To Real Thorough// But I Keep Lookin At His Verse I Think I C Somewhere// Oh Well//
Real Punches 7/10 Flowz 5/10 (wack) Whitey Punches 8/10 (doubletime You're Wack Son// Ill Rearange Your Face Like Michael Jakson) Lmao Dat Was Hot// Flowz 7/10 Vote= Whitey |
Ha Ha I Lied Dis Go To Whitey
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This battle was shaky like a fuckin strppers ass.
This battle goes to Real because that otha kat shit sounds, and looks pre-written, and I aint up on fake niggihz. V/real |
Real Thorough nice verse you kilt ths dude. your punches were good. try to work more multiples in to your work though.white you did good too but he overpowered you with the punches. next time step it up in that area. return the fava:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123395
vote=Real Thorough |
This battle easily went to RealThorough- His punches weren't killer but they were at least there. Whitey's verse was simple, played out, structured horribly, ahhh-- Vote: RealThorough
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That was an aight battle. Whitey came with basically no punches. whitey, ur flow was weak, u had no punches and NO multies. u gotta elevate. RT, ur shit was pretty good. u had some nice multies and ur flow was aight. u had a few decent punches which really won it for u.
vot - Real Thorough return tha fava? http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124183 |
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