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lyrical KILLAH 05-08-04 06:09 PM

~Real Thorough (vs) lyrical KILLAH~
 
This Is The Rulez
No Crew Votes
No Dick Ridin Votes
No Hatin Votes
U Spitt First
10-15 Lines
No Feedin

Real Thorough 05-08-04 06:17 PM

Aight checkin in, and will be droppin in like 1o or less minutes.

Real Thorough 05-08-04 06:27 PM

watch me curl ya tongue reverse to leave ya breathless, da punish is endless/
while Lyrical Killah- ima beat you so dont think youll win, yer dreams senseless/
so lets please end this, as i put `shells around ya throat` like wearin a `phillipine necklace` ..// (pukka shells)

da weakest link to our site, kick'd u out is wat we shoulda did.. yer a waist, so ill shove a mid/
while i poison ya lungs cause i know its `bad to Cus*` like `swearing infront of kids` ..// (focus)

yer here to die(DI) so ill help ya ta dissapper like hocus pocus/
ya chance is hopeless, cus its like im `robbin James Bond` how i `take the gold win from Lyrical` ..// (goldeneye)

lyrical KILLAH 05-08-04 06:46 PM

look nigga...check it...


listen Real, Ur Done, witout me even liftin mah wrist…/
Ur punches wouldn’t be ‘Hot’ if u fried-ur-fist…/
Despite-ur-licks, ur mah Punches still come zealous…/
Real get Shitted-On so Much, even his Toilet-got-Jealous…/
You a stay at home nigga who acts like a real life playa…/
If u had herpes in ur mouth u still wouldnt be a ILL rhyme sayer…/
Gettin the whip and runin you over cause your rhymes are tired…/
I hope u inspired to check the label cause ur whole verse is expired…/
This homo-confused,he likes-wizards but keeps playing with “magic-johnsons“…/
U-come-weak,ur style is old,u need to be like “michael and keep jacking-sons…/
I’m so ‘ahead-mah-time I was given birth before mah parents-were-conceived…/
Real-keyin-ill,is like aliens cuz its “neva-seen” and not believed…/


holla back at cha boy!!!!!!!!

lyrical KILLAH 05-08-04 07:20 PM

Uppin For Some Votes On This Great Battle

Real Thorough 05-08-04 07:53 PM

Yes sirr, lets get some battle on this flawless battle, ayo dunn lets do a collab. what up??

PoLiFicK 05-08-04 07:56 PM

ite nice drop

real-ite flow wit some quick slapps but not 2 good of punches

bestline-yer here to die(DI) so ill help ya ta dissapper like hocus pocus/
ya chance is hopeless,

nice

worsteline-alot

overall yo verse gets a 7.8/10

killah

bestline-listen Real, Ur Done, witout me even liftin mah wrist…/
Ur punches wouldn’t be ‘Hot’ if u fried-ur-fist…/

nice

worsteline-none

overall yo verse gets a 8.6/10

winner 2 killah

Real Thorough 05-08-04 07:59 PM

aight, lets get more in. and honest votes is always accepted

Darrk 05-08-04 08:08 PM

Both SMooth Verses.. Goood Punch Lines and Flow's.. But Killah got the bess of you Real.. No Hating Cause me n u battled, giving u Honest truth

V/Killah

K-Trin 05-08-04 08:14 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122401
^^drop a vote niggas

This was a tight battle.

Thorough-Bad flow/structure.U went from a long line with like 20 sllyabes to one with like 12.u can't do that.
Best line-
watch me curl ya tongue reverse to leave ya breathless, da punish is endless/
while Lyrical Killah- ima beat you so dont think youll win, yer dreams senseless/
^^it flowed so well and sounded so good.Nice opener,but you just messed up afterwards.
overall-6/10

Lrycial Killah-U had a couple of stretched lines,but u still flowed better than Thourough.U had a lot of funny punches in there.My fav. is-
Despite-ur-licks, ur mah Punches still come zealous…/
Real get Shitted-On so Much, even his Toilet-got-Jealous…/
I laughed during that one.
overall-7/10

Vote-Lyrical(drop a vote in my battle)

lyrical KILLAH 05-08-04 08:26 PM

Yo Thx For The Honest Votes Keep Them Coming Ppl!

DEMONIC 05-08-04 09:20 PM

aight

punches-lyrical killah
rhymes-real thorough
multies-killah
enjoyment-killa
flow-thorough
overall-killa

best line-Despite-ur-licks, ur mah Punches still come zealous…/
Real get Shitted-On so Much, even his Toilet-got-Jealous…/

no hate

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-08-04 09:33 PM

Lyrical Killah u ripped it i think u killem at this N-0-0-B dats nice

ReAAL THOROUGH u had some good shit n nice battle

BREAK DOWN


REAL THOROUGH

FLow 8/10
RHymes 7/10
Multis 6/10
Structure7/10
Punches 6/10
34/50

Lyrical KILLAH

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
multis 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
36/50


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