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~Real Thorough (vs) lyrical KILLAH~
This Is The Rulez
No Crew Votes No Dick Ridin Votes No Hatin Votes U Spitt First 10-15 Lines No Feedin |
Aight checkin in, and will be droppin in like 1o or less minutes.
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watch me curl ya tongue reverse to leave ya breathless, da punish is endless/
while Lyrical Killah- ima beat you so dont think youll win, yer dreams senseless/ so lets please end this, as i put `shells around ya throat` like wearin a `phillipine necklace` ..// (pukka shells) da weakest link to our site, kick'd u out is wat we shoulda did.. yer a waist, so ill shove a mid/ while i poison ya lungs cause i know its `bad to Cus*` like `swearing infront of kids` ..// (focus) yer here to die(DI) so ill help ya ta dissapper like hocus pocus/ ya chance is hopeless, cus its like im `robbin James Bond` how i `take the gold win from Lyrical` ..// (goldeneye) |
look nigga...check it...
listen Real, Ur Done, witout me even liftin mah wrist…/ Ur punches wouldn’t be ‘Hot’ if u fried-ur-fist…/ Despite-ur-licks, ur mah Punches still come zealous…/ Real get Shitted-On so Much, even his Toilet-got-Jealous…/ You a stay at home nigga who acts like a real life playa…/ If u had herpes in ur mouth u still wouldnt be a ILL rhyme sayer…/ Gettin the whip and runin you over cause your rhymes are tired…/ I hope u inspired to check the label cause ur whole verse is expired…/ This homo-confused,he likes-wizards but keeps playing with “magic-johnsons“…/ U-come-weak,ur style is old,u need to be like “michael and keep jacking-sons…/ I’m so ‘ahead-mah-time I was given birth before mah parents-were-conceived…/ Real-keyin-ill,is like aliens cuz its “neva-seen” and not believed…/ holla back at cha boy!!!!!!!! |
Uppin For Some Votes On This Great Battle
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Yes sirr, lets get some battle on this flawless battle, ayo dunn lets do a collab. what up??
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ite nice drop
real-ite flow wit some quick slapps but not 2 good of punches bestline-yer here to die(DI) so ill help ya ta dissapper like hocus pocus/ ya chance is hopeless, nice worsteline-alot overall yo verse gets a 7.8/10 killah bestline-listen Real, Ur Done, witout me even liftin mah wrist…/ Ur punches wouldn’t be ‘Hot’ if u fried-ur-fist…/ nice worsteline-none overall yo verse gets a 8.6/10 winner 2 killah |
aight, lets get more in. and honest votes is always accepted
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Both SMooth Verses.. Goood Punch Lines and Flow's.. But Killah got the bess of you Real.. No Hating Cause me n u battled, giving u Honest truth
V/Killah |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122401
^^drop a vote niggas This was a tight battle. Thorough-Bad flow/structure.U went from a long line with like 20 sllyabes to one with like 12.u can't do that. Best line- watch me curl ya tongue reverse to leave ya breathless, da punish is endless/ while Lyrical Killah- ima beat you so dont think youll win, yer dreams senseless/ ^^it flowed so well and sounded so good.Nice opener,but you just messed up afterwards. overall-6/10 Lrycial Killah-U had a couple of stretched lines,but u still flowed better than Thourough.U had a lot of funny punches in there.My fav. is- Despite-ur-licks, ur mah Punches still come zealous…/ Real get Shitted-On so Much, even his Toilet-got-Jealous…/ I laughed during that one. overall-7/10 Vote-Lyrical(drop a vote in my battle) |
Yo Thx For The Honest Votes Keep Them Coming Ppl!
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aight
punches-lyrical killah rhymes-real thorough multies-killah enjoyment-killa flow-thorough overall-killa best line-Despite-ur-licks, ur mah Punches still come zealous…/ Real get Shitted-On so Much, even his Toilet-got-Jealous…/ no hate |
Lyrical Killah u ripped it i think u killem at this N-0-0-B dats nice
ReAAL THOROUGH u had some good shit n nice battle BREAK DOWN REAL THOROUGH FLow 8/10 RHymes 7/10 Multis 6/10 Structure7/10 Punches 6/10 34/50 Lyrical KILLAH Flow 8/10 Rhymes 8/10 multis 7/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 7/10 36/50 |
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