BeastMasta K vs. Fearlez
 

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Sorry about screwing up your name, if a mod could fix that thanks

Who The Hell Is Fearlez, Crook With A Deal
If Ya Keep Talkin U Gonna Meet A Crook With A Steel
If Ya Really Want Beef Ama Hand You War
Got Big Gunz Shit U Never Seen Before
Just A No Name Nigga Seekin To Rap
U Got A Big Game Spitter Cuttin Ure Sack
Yo Everything Was Kool Had To Start Dissin
Front All U Want But U Better Start Listenin
Point Blank Simple And Plane, You Small Change
Tear You Up Out Of The Frame, From Close Range

Wigga, nigga, whateva it don't matta(matter)
They ain't gonna be able to tell lata(later)
I would say i'm gonna knock you out but i don't lie
I'm gonna fucking torcher you till you die
Beatmasta is thinking he is old school
When he is just starting to get school'ed
The whole world is mine and i'm territorial
So get the fuck out before i take you out
Verbal assault is over and you are just another statistic
So here's a tissue, the only one i'm gonna issue

fake fearlez bitch tryin to impress the best
u wanna impress me let me see u fake ure death
untill then you fucks dont deserve respect
what posesed who gave you the nerve to flex
god bless you ama lay your sole to rest
think about it next time you oppose a threat
be careful how you mention the name
ill tear you out of the game at close range
who want it,runnin your mouth without a warrent
what you gonna do now got ure ass is fuckin chronic

Hey beatmasta,
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123107
^^ go into our battle aLREADY.
I'll vote in this battle now

Okay,both of you were far too simple.I can underatand why though,casue you both newbs.But next time,add some complexity to ur verse.Flow was better by Beatmasta , although it wasn't good as well.Keep lines around the same # of sllyables.Neither of you were complex,but beatmasta's lines seemed to have more time put in it.Neither of you got creative as well.But at least Beats had a mutli is his first verse(why do you have 2??).Fearlez, you need serious work.Ur punches,flow,everthing was lacking.

Vote-Beatmasta K

This one has to go to Beatmasta.. fearlez Not hating.. but i dunno in what lvl u were Dawg.. Keeep Practicing

V/Beatmasta

uppin to get the rest of the votes, and why do you have 2 beat?

very newbish battle from both sides,but beatmasta k you were more personal in your verse with better flow and punch.as for the other guy,you need to work hard because a couple of your lines didnt rhyme and the last line you rhymed tissue with tissue.work harde
vot:beatmastak

Damn Dis Battle Was Wack// But Ders Has To Be A Winna//

Bk Won Dis// Why Cuz He Had Good Personals And Lil Good Flowz In Der

Fearlez Keep Battlin U Get Betta Homie// Work On Yo Punches// And Flowz// And Watch U Become Something//

Vote=bk

Return the fav. All I was looking for was
Struc.
Punches
and personals, and BK took em all.
V/BK