ghost 354 vs LiL ChucKy
 

you know the deal

no bullshit votes or none of that

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nigga done named himself after a porcelin doll dont deny it
this ghostly flow leave yo win column on a diet
this aint austin powerz but u like the fat bastard of this site
tryna steal my mojo iz a no no so just walk towardz the light
or get left wraped in a rug an stuffed in the trunk of a skylark
u got riped apart like u waz covered in blood an fed to a shark
have u tookin out the game just like james worthy
send shotz threw ya jersey that make u melt like a hershey
so get the picture an inbed this in yo memory
ill shoot a line down yo face an call it a line of semmetry

Ayo, feelin the glorly of battlin ghost, seems like in this one i'ma be the host./
Your lyrics make me sick, just sit down and take a lick of my dick./
Feelin sorrow for you nigga, after this battle don't ask to borrow it nigga./
I'm always rockin tha Rapbattles.com everywhere, even rockin joe underwear./
I'll spit in your face, believe me you won't even figure out a trace to have tha pace./
Look at first i sucked, but now i rock, gettin KO's just like ken shamrock./
Twist ur leg into three's an fours, punch ya in tha face and push ya out tha door./
When i submit this shiznitch, it's gonna b a blow-out, like my civic doin burn-outs./
I'll place ur teeth on tha curb, cuz when you spit it sounds to much like a blurb./
This is my best, so i'll stop an lay to rest, cuz ya best put on a bullet-proof-vest.

ok coo uppin for votes

ghost took this battle wordplay and punches were sick opener was hott and closer was straight...structure was ok nothing really to it flow was good...overall good verse

best bar:have u tookin out the game just like james worthy
send shotz threw ya jersey that make u melt like a hershey

worst bar:or get left wraped in a rug an stuffed in the trunk of a skylark
u got riped apart like u waz covered in blood an fed to a shark

lil chucky i wasnt feelin ya verse your structure is different but i aint gonna hate on that but it wasnt as consistent as ghost's verse...u had some ok punches and decent wordplay and u got potential if u work on it....

best bar:This is my best, so i'll stop an lay to rest, cuz ya best put on a bullet-proof-vest. <<and that wasnt even a good bar but it was your best one

worst bar's:the whole entire rhyme elevate

vote:ghost354 overall he had a hotter verse and i felt it more than lil's verse

great battle but weak blows
ghost need to go 2 da gym more
and chucky?, i beat u when we battled u waz weak
and da verse u put on waz weaker than this
and that means you imroved (you've been goin 2 da gym)
this is an eazy one...
MY RATINGZ...
opener...GHOST
flows...GHOST
blows...CHUCKY
lyricism...CHUCKY but it waz weak, dawg
finisher...BOTH WERE WACK but i pick GHOST

and da winner is...CHUCKY do betta on ya nex battle

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^^ how he get the vote when i wo nlike every category you said



preciate the votez though uppin

Ghost_354 - WEAK!.. lol, but I guess it will do.. and the flow wasnt that bad

Best Line - so get the picture an inbed this in yo memory
ill shoot a line down yo face an call it a line of semmetry

Worst Line - or get left wraped in a rug an stuffed in the trunk of a skylark
u got riped apart like u waz covered in blood an fed to a shark

Lil Chucky - Weak spit man.. had multi's but no personals or punches.. your flow wasnt that hot either.

Best Line - Ayo, feelin the glorly of battlin ghost, seems like in this one i'ma be the host/
Your lyrics make me sick, just sit down and take a lick of my dick.

Worst Line - I'll place ur teeth on tha curb, cuz when you spit it sounds to much like a blurb./
This is my best, so i'll stop an lay to rest, cuz ya best put on a bullet-proof-vest.

OVERALL - Weak battle.. but I gotta give it to ghost.. he just had better punches and flow.. Lil chucky.. your shit didnt ryme man.. and the punches wernt there.. pretty sad you lost to ghost.

VOTE - Ghost_354

not that sad i beat him twice so dont get yea self down

lol... oh yeah buddy.. keep talkin man, I could beat you any day!

stop free postin in my shit son you couldnt beat me on any day either

fine Im done postin here.. keep thinkin I cant beat you there bud

yo, ghost be ridin dick, fa real!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

son you should stop free postin to fuckin 10 year old you got beat easily in that battle get over it kid