Luminaz Vs Discharge
 

10 lines
no dick ridin
we gt till 5 am GMT time

lets do this

aight ill key up and u key up same time when u check in ill check in holla!

checkin in
 

k well im checkin in rite now home boy
hope dis is gona be a gd battle

iight im checkin in but dont wait till the last minute and right shit down bro lets get this shit goin now ill spit first but no feedin off my verse aight?

how old are u kid?....i bet u in 2nd grade and just learned how to read//
u rappin...... dont belong...its like nuns having sex... and smoking weed//
man quit rappin you 0-3, your not good.... and never gonna get better//
your punches are just fucking cheesy like "goldfish" blasted with cheddar//
your in deep trouble.....i use great vocabulary and leave u scared&puzzled//
im too good for u i have u just plain speechless.nigga u "lyrically-muzzled"//
"though sucks and shall not rap"..... even god wont forgive you for ur sins//
u on "needles and pins"....ill be very suprised if ur weak ass gets any wins//
ur rhymes are just trash...... and i threw them in the garbage - receptycle//
this bitch love evrything with testicle...hes the definition of rap-homosexual//

battle
 

lets do this, im gona try a new style

discharge, u sound like sumthin leaked out of a diseased dick,
your rhymes so corny they belong in a shitty teen flick,

soon as a plant my rhymes people grow an obsession,
i even see it in your eyes and ur facial expression,

im commitin fatalities like in mortal kombat,
rip off ya hed take out ya spine see how your body react,

discharge, last nite i let your girl know hu the fuck was in charge,
u shud try it 2 i strongly recommend the facial dick massage,

man, im wreckin mc's like crash test dummies,
your rhymes are misleading like those fake breast hunnies,

its been thirty minutes man dont go try to prewrite shit now

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ my bad i dint kno u dropped lol nice battle^^^^^^^^^^

man..discharge won this battle

i dont even think this was a battle this was just plain merk iight break down
discharge
how old are u kid?....i bet u in 2nd grade and just learned how to read//
u rappin...... dont belong...its like nuns having sex... and smoking weed//
-nice punch!

man quit rappin you 0-3, your not good.... and never gonna get better//
your punches are just fucking cheesy like "goldfish" blasted with cheddar//
-i get it hhahahahha another nice punch

"though sucks and shall not rap"..... even god wont forgive you for ur sins//
u on "needles and pins"....ill be very suprised if ur weak ass gets any wins//
-shit dogg i dont think he will get a win either lmao

ur rhymes are just trash...... and i threw them in the garbage - receptycle//
this bitch love evrything with testicle...hes the definition of rap-homosexual//
-i knew that just pure true^^^

luminaz only good line

discharge, last nite i let your girl know hu the fuck was in charge,
u shud try it 2 i strongly recommend the facial dick massage,
-nice personal

ok discharge merked this nigga go elevate luminaz before u go up against someone with this much talent
vote=discharge

Discharge - Good spit man, had some hot lines in there and some damn niice flow.

Best Line - "though sucks and shall not rap"..... even god wont forgive you for ur sins//
u on "needles and pins"....ill be very suprised if ur weak ass gets any wins//

Worst Line - ur rhymes are just trash...... and i threw them in the garbage - receptycle//
this bitch love evrything with testicle...hes the definition of rap-homosexual//

Luminaz - iight spit man, wasnt feelin your new style.. you had some good flow but punches were not that hot.

Best Line - soon as a plant my rhymes people grow an obsession,
i even see it in your eyes and ur facial expression,

Worst Line - discharge, u sound like sumthin leaked out of a diseased dick,
your rhymes so corny they belong in a shitty teen flick,

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to Dis for better punches and better flow, Lum you should go back to your old style cuz I wasnt feelin that verse to much.. you had flow there but your punches were lacking.

VOTE - Discharge

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123227

how old are u kid?....i bet u in 2nd grade and just learned how to read//
u rappin...... dont belong...its like nuns having sex... and smoking weed//

\^^ creative wordplay...decent opener


u on "needles and pins"....ill be very suprised if ur weak ass gets any wins//
ur rhymes are just trash...... and i threw them in the garbage - receptycle//
this bitch love evrything with testicle...hes the definition of rap-homosexual//


^^ dats nice punches there...good closer


rhymes 7
flow 6
punches 7

discharge, u sound like sumthin leaked out of a diseased dick,
your rhymes so corny they belong in a shitty teen flick,

^^ funny..but not sure how rhymes relate to a shitty teen flick

discharge, last nite i let your girl know hu the fuck was in charge,
u shud try it 2 i strongly recommend the facial dick massage,

man, im wreckin mc's like crash test dummies,
your rhymes are misleading like those fake breast hunnies,

^^ ur shit is fuynny...but they lack strong punches...if you can manage to retain that humor but throw stronger punches in the middle, you'd be unstoppable

but...this battle goes to DIS for having harder punches

that is what a battle is about


Vote: Dis

luminaz: too basic man, u had some flow but nothing else was really special...
discharge: U had alot of metas (which is good) and u also had a good flow...
Yours was much more advanced than luminaz.
You had better structure, punches and metas. Flow was da same.

Vote: DIscharge

discharge got this battle

luminaz-your verse was too simplistic......it was not creative at all and your punches were really weak....u had no meta's or anything

dis-your lines are way to long shorten them up a bit........u had some good concepts just work on your wording a lil bit.......but u took this battle wit harder punches and metas