~Beatmasta k (VS) lyrical KILLAH~
 

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yeah u musta been hot when you first came out
came to pee in your parade and put ure fuckin camp fire out
you better stop runnin your mouth, or ill come to your house,
pull a 44 magnum out, and blow your mutha fuckin brains out
a knock niggaz like you out in couples
not cause i can box either, cause i was born with 7 knocks in each knuckles
pass me the rat poison here killah smoke that
then ama hit you in the head with a crack pipe and make ure lungs collapse
if ure a dawg ama wolf and i will attack
and eat your frail ass up like a snack ure no match
when it comes to decent rap thier was only one author
hes jsut barkin cause he just found out am his father
ill rob the dumb old fucker and tell him nigga to follow
give it up killah the points in my bullets are hollow
am gonna reconstruct ure face with a 40 bottle
i told your mum to get an abortion she wouldnt listen
she kept suckin dickin and smokin crack in the kitchen

Beat write your shit, perfect it, if you need to, rehearse it.../
Yeah, you're not wack! Only thing that's not ill is your verses!.../
Forget a battle, he couldn't swing a punch in a playground.../
And your audio hooks - You couldn't feel then with surround sound.../
Sonning this geek, your words are cheaper than your beats.../
If you had a dollar for each win, you'd STILL be living on the streets.../
Beat your verse is predictible - brag, brag, brag and some filler.../
Put it this way - You couldn't flow well If you lived in a river.../
Old timer, a veteran with words and disses all fucked and mushy.../
Beat even stuck his dick in Bagpuss so he could say he got some pussy!.../
Either way your gay, I hope your happy with this roastin'.../
If I were you - Id hire a ghostwriter so you can like the shit your postin'.../
Beat end of the road, a victim of Sick Scriptures left bloody and killed.../
Vet status...pah...you'd be better off admiting your unskilled.../

Ight beat.. u did alright but i wasnt feelin ur flow that much.. and ur shit wasnt all that good.. ur punches lacked and all...

killah:
Beat write your shit, perfect it, if you need to, rehearse it.../
Yeah, you're not wack! Only thing that's not ill is your verses!.../
-that line rippt him right there

best line:
Sonning this geek, your words are cheaper than your beats.../
If you had a dollar for each win, you'd STILL be living on the streets.../

worstline:none

ight this battle goes to killah

Yo Thx For The Honest Vote Wating 4 Some More

punches lyrical:Sonning this geek, your words are cheaper than your beats.../
If you had a dollar for each win, you'd STILL be living on the streets.../

personals lyrical:Beat your verse is predictible - brag, brag, brag and some filler.../
Put it this way - You couldn't flow well If you lived in a river.../

metas lyrical:Put it this way - You couldn't flow well If you lived in a river.../

^^somewhat

wittiness lyrical:Beat end of the road, a victim of Sick Scriptures left bloody and killed.../
Vet status...pah...you'd be better off admiting your unskilled.../

structure both: both didnt have too stretched of bars

flow lyrical: was feeling his flow more

overall i gotta go with lyrical

Both Was Aight//

Beat

Punches 5/10
Flowz 5/10
=10

Lyrical

Punches 6/10
Flowz 5/10
=11

Beat U Need To Work On Yo Struture Cuz When I Was Readin It// I Got Bored Homie// Keep It Simple And Short//

Vote=lyrical

breakdown:

beatmasta:

yeah u musta been hot when you first came out
came to pee in your parade and put ure fuckin camp fire out
^^ok opener 3/10
you better stop runnin your mouth, or ill come to your house,
pull a 44 magnum out, and blow your mutha fuckin brains out
^^not feelin it the whole "gangsta rap" is out if u didnt notice 2/10
a knock niggaz like you out in couples
not cause i can box either, cause i was born with 7 knocks in each knuckles
^^weak bar 2nd line stretched 1/10
pass me the rat poison here killah smoke that
then ama hit you in the head with a crack pipe and make ure lungs collapse
^^one of your better bars 5/10
if ure a dawg ama wolf and i will attack
and eat your frail ass up like a snack ure no match
^^getting better 6/10
when it comes to decent rap thier was only one author
hes jsut barkin cause he just found out am his father
^^ummm ok 1st line good 2nd line bad 5/10
ill rob the dumb old fucker and tell him nigga to follow
give it up killah the points in my bullets are hollow
am gonna reconstruct ure face with a 40 bottle
^^another OK punch 4/10
i told your mum to get an abortion she wouldnt listen
she kept suckin dickin and smokin crack in the kitchen
^^suckin dickin....??ooook umm still a decent bar 6/10

overall: 32/80

lyrical killah:

Beat write your shit, perfect it, if you need to, rehearse it.../
Yeah, you're not wack! Only thing that's not ill is your verses!.../
^^lol good opener 7/10
Forget a battle, he couldn't swing a punch in a playground.../
And your audio hooks - You couldn't feel then with surround sound.../
^^ok punch 5/10
Sonning this geek, your words are cheaper than your beats.../
If you had a dollar for each win, you'd STILL be living on the streets.../
^^lol good shyt 7/10
Beat your verse is predictible - brag, brag, brag and some filler.../
Put it this way - You couldn't flow well If you lived in a river.../
^^2nd line a lil played but still good 6/10
Old timer, a veteran with words and disses all fucked and mushy.../
Beat even stuck his dick in Bagpuss so he could say he got some pussy!.../
^^hmm ok no comment ok bar 5/10
Either way your gay, I hope your happy with this roastin'.../
If I were you - Id hire a ghostwriter so you can like the shit your postin'.../
^^lil played 4/10
Beat end of the road, a victim of Sick Scriptures left bloody and killed.../
Vet status...pah...you'd be better off admiting your unskilled.../
^^decent closer 6/10

overall: 40/70

vote: lyrical overall his verse was hotter he had some dope punches and consistency which were the highlights of this battle elevate beatmasta

~!1!~

Yo Thx For The Honest Vote Wating 4 Some More

lyrical got this he was spittin some nice punches and his flow was good to he came real hard and he had some original shit. beast came hard had nice punches but lyrical disses and punhes was juss 2 much 4 him.

my vote:lyrical