~SAC KING (VS) lyrical KILLAH~
 

This Is The Rulez
No Crew Votes
No Dick Ridin Votes
No Hatin Votes
I Spitt First
5-10 Lines
No Feedin

aight w/e im koo wit dis spit somtin and i will chek in...-n - like 30 mins or somtin and a will reply wit a rap

ayo check it.....check it...listen...

King your flows are empty like ghetto pantry shelves.../
You couldnt spit fire if you were iraqi oil wells.../
King the capacity of ur brain must be that of a rock.../
The way you spit is somthing that a 6 or 7 year old wouldnt even mock.../
"KILLAH" literaly Untounchable,but i make ya feel my statements.../
Even if you were a sick scientist,you couldnt make a ILL creation../
King is like a neglected child,but this cat gets even more abused.../
Ive even seen more broke down cars,that can exell more than you.../
Fuck this last line,i dont need it,this is the only useless line i need.../
I just type words like OXYGEN,so i give ya some time to breathe.../

holla atcha boy KILLAH!!!!!!!!

yo i meant to put 10-15 lines no 5-10 my bad!

this fools a clown rappin gainst me dawg imma audio mechanic//
let me manage dis flow fluent like a bitch moanin spanish//
u can open up yo cabbage's i step in ya brain'z //
so when u listen to dis magic you can think im david blain//
sac king da magician aint got shit up his sleeve//
all i do is write dis verse and have u fall like christopha reeve
if this was on paper it be a waste of my time im here to write deez'e rhymes to feed ur mind//
i admit u got style and some koo meta4's at time'z//
but i aint into biters who jakin pre- writtin punchlines//
u aint no mc just some fagit lil busta//
my abilities infinate like 2 lyrics facin each other...//
i have yo ass exposed like some unda cova brother//
develop some street intelligence until complete development//
and these elements will keep u from yo cascut measurements'//

yo people' vote for who u think one..honest vote's....peace.

yo nice drop ppl hit the votes up

decent battle y'all breakdown:
Lyrical:
Punches: 6/10
Flow: 7/10
Opener: 7/10 nice opener
Closer: 5/10
Overall: 25/40

Breakdown:
Sac King
Punches: 7/10
Flow: 6/10
Opener: 5/10
Closer: 6/10
Overall: 24.40
Both verses was weak, but lyrical's opener was the only respectable line in whole battle in my opinion
Vote: Lyrikal

Lyrical Killah

King your flows are empty like ghetto pantry shelves.../
You couldnt spit fire if you were iraqi oil wells.../
Decent, I understood it

King the capacity of ur brain must be that of a rock.../
The way you spit is somthing that a 6 or 7 year old wouldnt even mock.../
Again decent
"KILLAH" literaly Untounchable,but i make ya feel my statements.../
Even if you were a sick scientist,you couldnt make a ILL creation../
Cool
King is like a neglected child,but this cat gets even more abused.../
Ive even seen more broke down cars,that can exell more than you.../
Decent
Fuck this last line,i dont need it,this is the only useless line i need.../
I just type words like OXYGEN,so i give ya some time to breathe.../
Pretty decent finisher
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Sac King

this fools a clown rappin gainst me dawg imma audio mechanic//
let me manage dis flow fluent like a bitch moanin spanish//
Decent, not really hittin'

u can open up yo cabbage's i step in ya brain'z //
so when u listen to dis magic you can think im david blain//
Again aight

sac king da magician aint got shit up his sleeve//
all i do is write dis verse and have u fall like christopha reeve
if this was on paper it be a waste of my time im here to write deez'e rhymes to feed ur mind//
Last line killed the flow

i admit u got style and some koo meta4's at time'z//
but i aint into biters who jakin pre- writtin punchlines//
Not hittin, juss there

u aint no mc just some fagit lil busta//
my abilities infinate like 2 lyrics facin each other...//
i have yo ass exposed like some unda cova brother//
A lil' betta

develop some street intelligence until complete development//
and these elements will keep u from yo cascut measurements'//
Not feelin' the flow

I feel Lyrical took this one, not by much...but his flowed better and his punches made more sense...Sac, juss work on ya punches is the main thang.......anyways

Lyrical Killah

Upping For Some Votes Plz Explain Well Dont Want D/q Votes

well im gonna have to do this

breakdown for sac-king
punches 6/10
flow 7/10
structure 8/10
overall verse is an *8*
best line:u can open up yo cabbage's i step in ya brain'z //
so when u listen to dis magic you can think im david blain//
your verse didnt make much sense
killah
punches 9/10
flo8/10
structure 8/10
best line:"KILLAH" literaly Untounchable,but i make ya feel my statements.../
Even if you were a sick scientist,you couldnt make a ILL creation../
myvote/killa

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lyrical - your shit was a nice solid verse....good punches....decent meta's....woulda liked to se sum personals....but u killed it wit punches....nice verse....good flow....wordplay was decent....nice drop kid....

sac - your verse was okay...it had a lot of fillers....flow was off in alot of spots....punchlines were very few.....too many fillers....didnt have the elevated verse....thats why my vote goes to lyrical....

vote - lyrical

Lyrical Killa-I liked ur verse.Nice similies,flow and punches
Best line-King your flows are empty like ghetto pantry shelves.../
You couldnt spit fire if you were iraqi oil wells.../
Worst line-King the capacity of ur brain must be that of a rock.../
The way you spit is somthing that a 6 or 7 year old wouldnt even mock.../

Sac King-Now ur verse I didn't like one bit.Uncreativie,flowed bad,and weak punches.
Best line-NONE
Worst line-sac king da magician aint got shit up his sleeve//
all i do is write dis verse and have u fall like christopha reeve

vOTE-Lyrical Killa...one sided battle
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