Battle
 

normal rules

and vote properly

10-20 lines max

im in
 

chk in in>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>get 2 spitin

yo
 

this cat woz sposed to spit first intha rulez so do i get tha win??????????????????????????????

here we go
 

yo get tha beat goin//
from dis point on theres no stoppin//
yo nigga dont push me to tha limit//
i gon pop yo ass and yo mother gon witness it//
when you at a gig tha whole crow tells you to stop before you even
begin//
when yor voice hits tha mike everyone left tha gym//
you punk ass nigga thinkin you gon get fame//
but da whole world knows you aint ready for tha game//
for dis battle i came in unprepared//
this battle'll be 1 way and there'll be no comparin//
when you rapped i went ta sleep before tha second line//
for rappin that bad da cops wanted ta give you a fine//
my friend sold ya weed sayin hydropronic was 10 bucks a joint//
i think in dis battle i proved ma point//
nigga go home you cant beat me//
dont believe me da votes'll prove it homey//
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BLAZE N RAP YALL :thefinger

S u N s E r N

hahaha
 

finally he shows..he tuk 2 days 2 write............,
still he cums wit weaker punches than me..bitch learn how to fight/
i think of harder punches when im dreaming ova nite!/
its frightenin doggydogg...thats such an ill name..../
but not as sick as 69..ya mam luv it..she always game/
clearly ur chanses of winning...are simply none.../
so this`ll b a quik post...to merk ya then im gone/
coz ur rhymes cudnt get with me if u woz on cloud nine/
i like tha smell of tuna,(pussy)..u only interesed in tha brine/(cum)
ur weak ass punches...swing wit no-aims/
rap like u infested.... wit aids in ya veins/
im like tha british army..2 elite for ur ass/
all u can do is spit friendly fire in my path/
so go out n buy a pen..cum back n try again/
till then u can add 2 my loses..once a-fukin-gen!!! :evilgrin:

upin! return tha favour rite away!!!!
 

lets get this clossed i`ll return tha favour asap................

t-storm won u had a better word play and they rhymed.
its frightenin doggydogg...thats such an ill name..../
but not as sick as 69..ya mam luv it..she always game/

DoggyDogg69 honstly u only had 2 lines that rhymed keep workin you'll get it sooner or later

i gotta hand this to T-storm he hit well harder and doggydogg ur rhymes were weak man you didnt have many punches.

vote t-storm

t storm tore doggy up lyrically. all i have to say. outclassed him in everyway. doggy was on a totally different level than doggy. doggy keep practising and improve ya self. try out styles n find one that suites u. use stronger punches and up ya vocab. t storm u still can up ya self. tight verse keep it going.

vote = t storm

omg t-storm merked ur ass kid this is an easy choice heres the break down

punches-t-storm
vocab-t-storm
flow-t-storm
personalls-t-storm
vote-t-storm
doggydog u need to step it up damn kid either elevate or quit props to t-storm that was a good spit.....

break down!

doggy
best line =In a month I've got more wins than yours double-doubled
No loss, count 'em: one, two, wait! Go back a couple

worst line=everything else

t-storm
best line=clearly ur chanses of winning...are simply none.../
so this`ll b a quik post...to merk ya then im gone/

worst line=none


ok this battle was sipmle storm merked doggydogg storm flow and punches was all better and his open and close was all better oveall his rap just killed dogg
vote=t-storm