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Fa aLL tHoSe pLaYaS wHo ThInk a LaDy cAnT RhYmE yOu BeSt LiStEn uP CoZ ThIs Is My TiMe !!!!!
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iM ThE iLLest ReaLest BiTcH YouLL EvA HeAr oR SeE So YoU BeSt ReCoGNiZe ThIs LAdY M.C

I Got MaH OwN KrEw RePrEsEnT BaYbEe-HuStLaS KnOwIn EvErY BaLLa FrOm ThE WeSt SiDe FrOnTeRs

WeVe GoT ThE BeSt SoUnD ItS SpReAd RiTe RoUnD
CoZ Im MaKiN aLL ThEsE FaKe BiTcHeS FuCkIn BoW DoWn

Ya CaNt StEp Up U FuCkEn FrEezE On ThA MiC
You ShOuLdVe CoMe ReAdY FoR OnE HeLL OF A NiTe
iLL ShOw YoU WaT I GoT So YoU BeTa bE PrEpArEd
Im ThE LaDy M.C ThIs ShItS AlReAdY BeEn DecLaReD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Erm you can rhyme but your not rhyming all the syballes like you suppose to plus it wasnt even that good you were talking about things that nobody cared.

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quite nice for a fist drop.i got a kind of old skool feel reading that,was imagining some sugar hill beats with it....keep dropping.....peace....

well u need at least one multi...and have none...ya know..and it wasn't that creative..learn how to write bars ya know...so it looks put together..not like a paragraph...ur vocab could step up also...is this ur first time doing this? *uno*


SB