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Indo VS GKillaz05
RULES
10 Lines U spit 1st no hate votes no d/r votes no crew Check in |
My first battle! Lets do this:
You thought you'd have your way battlin a Newbie, Please G you barely even move me// I've seen your type preying on young ones jackin up little kid's for their lunch funds// But while you was playing with yo-yo's I was on the low-low on the block trying to get that dough dough// No-No I never got caught by the po-po's but the fiends kept coming back like yo-yo's// This guy talkin about guns like he really hard, son I got more 4,5 and 9's then a deck of cards// Retard beating me aint in the plans, I wouldn't feel you if you touched me with both hands// But your better off keepin your hands to your self, get donkey konged on the head leave you lookin like one of Santa's elfs// I'm in the Army so I know you can't harm me but in my free time I'm chillin with your gal sippin Armi*// Why you chose me is the logical question but raise your hand before you answer cuz class is in session// You got used and trashed like an old condom sorry Kid I told ya You don't want none// * Armi = Armadale Vodka |
iight.. checkin in.. sorry it took so long.. I been gone all morn'n.. will spit in like 10 mins
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This man named indo is reppin a city that loves to bragg...
I love to kill people from fag town.. put em in a body bag... (Ft. Bragg) Indo dont even use his own verses.. uses a rappin device... Thats why his style is so whack sayin the same word twice... Take my advice Rap Battles dont want you leave us alone... Or atleast postpone this battle until your skillz are grown... Indo's pickin up a phone for plessure dialing 1-800-IamGAP...(Gay and Proud) You should dial 1-800-Learn2RAP before I blow you off the map... I am done wit this whack newb Indo his rymes are to simple... This is goin to be a straight KO.. Im popped you like a pimple... |
iight .. lets get some votes goin for this battle.. leave a link and I will return the fav
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aight umm im not gon vote cuzz dis niggaz indo is bitin
son I got more 4,5 and 9's then a deck of cards// ^^^^lloyd banks said dat shit dunn...on dat emeniem beat and it said it da same way...so u lose rite there my vote-g |
just said you wernt gun vote.. and then you went ahead and voted.. lol, good job
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he bite an still didnt have any tight lines they was all stretched out no kinda punchs closer didnt even come close to rhymin and you should start tain useless shit out ya lines tha you dont need to make ya punchs hit harder and get creative and try usin wordplay son i aint even holdin bitin against you shit jay z bites so aint shit but seriusoly take my advice cause that verse wasnt even close to average and g killas ummm decent verse
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UPPIN for votes
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UPPIN for votes... will retrun the fav
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This Battle Waz Eazy 2 Figure Out, Indo Needs 2 Work More ON His Vocab, Flow, Blows, & Everything Cauze It Waz All Weak Gkilla Did Good And His Finisher Waz Kinda Good, But Next Time U Need 2 Put More Blows In. My Honest Rating... Opener...It Waz Wack But Waz Better, Gkilla Flow...GKilla Blows...GKilla Lyricism...GKilla Finisher...GKilla And GKilla Iz Da Winner Of This Match, Congratulationz Indo Needz 2 Work More, Work On Da Blows And Flows And Have Better Openers And Finishers Nex Time. I'll Appreciated If U Vote On My Vote +Krario Vs. NY State Of Mind+ |
You thought you'd have your way battlin a Newbie, Please G you barely even move me//
I've seen your type preying on young ones jackin up little kid's for their lunch funds// ^^^ dat was wack I'm in the Army so I know you can't harm me but in my free time I'm chillin with your gal sippin Armi*// Why you chose me is the logical question but raise your hand before you answer cuz class is in session// You got used and trashed like an old condom sorry Kid I told ya You don't want none// ^^ that was awful This man named indo is reppin a city that loves to bragg... I love to kill people from fag town.. put em in a body bag... ^^ ugh...beats indos opener I am done wit this whack newb Indo his rymes are to simple... This is goin to be a straight KO.. Im popped you like a pimple... ^^ the popped u like a pimple line is hella played Vote: Gkilla...better punches.. |
This guy talkin about guns like he really hard, son I got more 4,5 and 9's then a deck of cards//
^^ Gkillaz wins this kid bit this line from real rude bois.. g unit track your a biter you lose dont get that twisted |
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