thugzy vs eric89
 

aigh,

10 lines
no d/r
no crew votes


check in first eric

gd look

aight,im check in,am keyin summet now

yo im checkin in so spit it up aight.

aight,this chunks shook,look,he taped his own mouth shut/
got his keyboard ready,he just got nuthin to put/
ma lyrics burn this bitch,like california bush fires/
tha heats to much,like on formula 1 car tyres/
ma punchlines strip ya,leave ya in a traumatised state/
this guys sreamin rape,as if this battle was a date/
look at ya,tryna put together 2 lines/
feedin off other emcees just to make ya shit rhyme/
ill stab ya and rob ya,like a member of tha cribs just got ya/
and leave ya fo dead,like tha washington sniper just shot ya

this shit is def. bitten.. look at his style.. and plus he never mentioned eric..

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lmao,wot tha fuck,look at this kid,go check my other shit kid,if u wanna see mentioned names,lol,and compare ma style were i av mentioned names to this style,theyll all match u fukin idiot.

yo look at this foo tryin to spit a rap
his words sound like a drunk who just downed a fifth of shnaps
he be talkin about me tapen my mouth shut
my punches are stonger than that and the only thing im punchin is ur moms cunt
when im done with this battle ur tears are gonna be flowin harder than rain
ur the mouse im the lion. u have no chance cuz im at the top of the food chain
ima leave u all shooken up like a fuckin clerk at a bank robbery
ur fuckin punch lines are probably pre-written unlike me
but thats ok cuz ur gonna need pre-written shit
cuz for u, battlin me is like tryin to get some clit. (it aint gonna happen)

lol,nice battle son,merc.inc u fuckin dumb fuck,if i voted against u in some battle or summet,im sorry.lol.but wot tha fuck,jus cos i dint mension a name,i cud show u 20 verses in battles now that dunt mension tha other guyz name,but dont meen they bitin.lol.wot a dik.

uppin 4 votes

thanks

alright alright this was kinda weak i think both of yall can do better-so with that said
Im going to have to give it to Thugzy on this one- his flow was better-punches and
personals hit harder- had a nice closer-and struc was aight

Eric i just think you need to stop feedin and make up a punchline- cuz thats when it hits hardest- is when its orginal-next time just hit harder with your punches and you could take this

vote=thugzy

drop an honest vote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123015

aight,safe g,uppin 4 votes..........

v/thugzy

i feel that he came harder....eric u feed a lil bit off of thugzy as well...and u had to many played lines in your verse.....thugzy just came too hard wit the punches that is why he took this one

v/thugzy

thnx g,uppin 4 votes...................

this guys sreamin rape,as if this battle was a date/<<< this is one of my lines reworded i said this kid pussy som im treatin this battle like date rape


come on now be real with ya self my vote goes to eric just for the simple fact he tried and he didnt use nobody else sit reworded you both need to elevate though work on harder punchs and VOCAB

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Gooood SPit's on Both sides.. Thugzy good Punchlines and Structure.. Butt i hope u didn't Take anyone's verses Man..

Eric good FLow n u got some good Punchlines.

Eric-when im done with this battle ur tears are gonna be flowin harder than rain
ur the mouse im the lion. u have no chance cuz im at the top of the food chain

Good SPit both of you's

V/Eric