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16BARS

05-09-04 04:07 PM

hot shit

// yo while you'll nigga's at home jacking yo dick// i'm on tha block slipping a bitch// and stacking my bricking// 16BARS you know i'm tha shit// a nigga battled me with some weak ass shit// so if any nigga want it// bring it an get it// i'm talking to any bitch nigga who reading my shit//

bring tha heat
16BARS
:shoot: :huh:
:nono:

D-Bate

05-09-04 04:10 PM

Pretty good man, you got good flow, just need to extend your Active Vocab a bit, and if you want to battle, Im up for it!!

Lucky7

05-09-04 06:09 PM

that shit was ass homie...

SpokenBluntly

05-09-04 06:14 PM

i didn't like it..u need multies...wordplay...creativity...*UNO*

SB

D-Bate

05-09-04 06:16 PM

Spoken, can you give me Feedback on Mine please???

D-Bate

05-09-04 06:18 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123259 someone check it out, give FeedBack!!

I. Mind

05-09-04 08:08 PM

dawg...can't u think of more rhymes??????

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