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Krairo Vs. NY State Of Mind
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Here Are Da Rulez 4 This, Don... 10 Linez Minimum 24 Linez Maximum U Can Spit Now, I'll Go After U, Good Luck :thumbup: |
So U Gonna Spit Or What? Spit First, Da Rulez R Set |
I'ma Give U Till 10:00 Eastern Time (NY) And If U Didn't Spit By Then I'll Have 2 Close It |
aight yo I was busy my boi had to record
I was busy recordin tracks for my boi but now I'm back deploy/ #1 my lyrical style which ain't nothin similar to pastor troy/ #2 NY State Of Mind kinda long name if your gonna waste time/ #3 stick to the basics and don't come fake wit it/ #4 or I'll end your carrer faster than a Ray Jay snippet/ #5 I'm a come hard like a lyrical assassain/ #6 stab u in the spot where u get the most action/ #7 why the hell can't I see your number of posts/ #8 are u hidin it like a convicted felon hide the toast/ #9 avatar like somthin out jason or a horror movie/ #10 I don't care about your name really just know u can't sue me/ #11 been took to court multiple times sittin on bench bein convicted of crimes/ #12 nothin sticks I always get off scott free / #13 I'm comittin misdameaners wit a couple apostrophes/ #14 I'm only 16 ain't never seen a cell/ #15 a interrogation room is the closest place I've been to a jail/ #16 u call yourself N.Y. State of Mind/ #17 but u remind me of State of Grace now your place/ #18 I've never heard u spit ain't I ain' got no beef/ #19 but if u wanna go I'll leave u hangin outside like a christmas reef/ #20 walkin in and take yo house like I'm the FED's/ #21 leave my signature on your T.V. while I'm gettin some head/ #22 not from your mother I'll bring a bitch and box of rubbers/ #23 I'll paint a scenery wit my kids if the children ask tell'em I love ya/ #24 I didn't wanna insult yo mom since I don't know her u know I ain't gotta bring other people into a battle. |
u gonna reply or what I figured u where ready to go its 10:11 PM if u don't reply by midnight I win how about that
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I Drop So Hard You Won't Know What Hit Ya Like Master P, +Make Em Say Uhh!+ Then I Split Ya I Be Killin U Slick Like In +The Godfather+ I'm Wrytin Too Much, All I Need Iz 2 Lines For You Why Bother How Can You Xpect To Win When I Be Da Best When My Blows Hit Az Big Az Pamela Anderson's Breasts It's Mother's Day And She Ain't At Ya Home That's Cauze She's In Mine Givin Me Some Fine Azz Dome All I Need Iz 10 Linez To Finish You Off U Bitch, Take It Like A Man And Don't Act So Tough. Voterz Holla Back!!! |
Now This Is Da Time Where People Come 2 Vote And Be Honest |
Krairo...
basically murdered this kid he dropped twenty lines of straight illness ny you dropped 10 with five bars of not good rappin work on ur punches ny...your flow is good and some personals hit but you just couldnt compare to what krairo was bringen ... ny...5/10 krairo 8/0 vote krairo |
C'mon People U Gotta Vote Here |
I was busy recordin tracks for my boi but now I'm back deploy/ #1
my lyrical style which ain't nothin similar to pastor troy/ #2 ^^^ I neva understood why people Number their lines...ne way...exactly where is trhe punch? leave my signature on your T.V. while I'm gettin some head/ #22 not from your mother I'll bring a bitch and box of rubbers/ #23 I'll paint a scenery wit my kids if the children ask tell'em I love ya/ #24 ^^^ WTF are u talkin about...geesh I Drop So Hard You Won't Know What Hit Ya Like Master P, +Make Em Say Uhh!+ Then I Split Ya ^^ i personally think this is wack...but its better than the 1st kids It's Mother's Day And She Ain't At Ya Home That's Cauze She's In Mine Givin Me Some Fine Azz Dome WTF...this is wack Aiyo...as I was readin K;s verse, I was thinking "This can't get any worse." Boy, was I wrong. This coulda been an easy verse for u NY...up your rhyming...punches...and DEF. metas Vote: Kair |
I # is so u can see how many lines it is and that 1st line I leftout a word
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I gotta give this to Krairo...that was a dope verse u maintained a decent style there dont let go of it u threw decent personals punches multies e.t.c it was a 1 man battle really. Sorry N.Y u got walked on...the least u could've done was put in 20 lines to make it more competative but u never really came close at all in the rap i did like th Pamela Anderson line though but both of you's keep it up
V/Krairo |
C'mon People, I'm Here Uppin 4 Votez And By Da Way, Krario 's Flow Waz Wack And Din't Rhyme Right And Only Talked Bout Himself And U Got Somthin Wrong With U If U Vote 4 Him, Dawg |
The last 8 lines are all about u #17 and down
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well krairo made a sick ass battle, and well ny state of mind,you got some hard work to do.first of all,krairo dropped 24 bars of nonstop ill shit.example:
I was busy recordin tracks for my boi but now I'm back deploy/ #1 my lyrical style which ain't nothin similar to pastor troy/ real good line no flaws here. however.krairo,you gotta work on you punches,only flaw in you whole verse. ny state of mind,your verse didnt live up to krairors,sry man,but its da truth.you need to use better wordplay,and um flow.thats it.but every thing else was thumbs up VOTE: krairo |
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