K-Amazin
 

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you first

Im heavy like virgins periods so i spit that shit that will burn the devil//
Mass-D-bate-tion(masterbation) u dug ure own grave betta get the sheval(shoval)//
im raw i bring up shit u done in kindergarden u hiding like u taliban Aka Mr bin laden//
i treat u like a bitch tell u "go play in the garden" while me and u mom be sexing and menaging//
group sex wit ure sister then ure bicth coming next u acting like a dickhead so friend i treat them pussys//
ure flows suicide on the edge screaming "go ahead push me" treat ure flow like a ho and beat the pussy//
u sud arrest my vocabalary and these metaphors for these lyrical crimes//
treat them like Oj kill a bitch then jump bail every time//
im a premature baby im b4 my time so watch ure mouth cos i will occpate it wit the nine//

Peace dawg good luck
thanks for setting it up

same thing u set up two which one is it i dunno neways i posted it twice

you cant be serious K, spittin shit like that/
you just another busta, that betta watch his back/
you think you got flow, *pffft* Hell No/
you got no game, and it's a shame, I gotta let you go/
time for you to fly, and say goodbye, my ass is too high, you can reach the sky/
did I hear a cry, or a pussy ask why, thought you were shy, guess you wanna die/
come to me, if you need the deed/
Im give it a squeeze, and make you bleed, drop you down to your knees/
here you kick and scream, make you whine and plead/
when you roll by, them bullets gonna fly/
this lead comin in a full supply/
Im not playin around, so you better bow down/
dont come to my town, and, and act a clown

come on peapole help me get this victory i need backin here i need to close this fuckin thread

uppin.............................................

uppin

upppinn........................................... .........

ok amazin lol lets get some votes up in here

amazin took this one and ill tell yah why...he had better hits, better flow and structure all round he took it but a bit of advice to d-bate youre rhyme scheme was good but youre using the obvious simplistic rhymes try switchign it up and using larger more complex words they help major

v=amazin
hey amazin i need mine voted on too up in the front lines in winning 3-2 i need that thread closed to so return the fav please its shifty-vs-tay g sincity

D man that was weak bro amazin got you but yo amazin lets battle go to bitch slapped "anyone wanna battle for real"

K-Amazin weak ass floe but you get my vote b/c the other cat's verse sucked ass more than yours. better floe, not really any got punches. your floe was all ova the place. next time put more thought into your shit before your write it.

vote=K-Amazin

okay this battle was weak as fuck

v/amazing though

because he had the better verse..........better flow but wasnt really anything good at all.........work on your punches both of you and structure along with your flow and your metas.....pc

Honestly I wasn't impressed...now I can see why peeps be hatin on us noobs so much...even though cats like me spit fire...the majority of noobs are killin it

Anyway... my vote goes to K AMAZIN

You're only good lines were :
"Mass-D-bate-tion(masterbation)"
"im a premature baby im b4 my time"
and both of those weren't even punches. At least your lyrics were more complex and its obvious you put more thought into it ( compared to your opponent)

Suggestion: before you submit, do a final review of your lyrics and make sure everything makes sense. My first battle on here, I had a grip of typos that could have made me lost the battle since they could change what you're lyrics mean.

Example:"Im heavy like virgins periods so i spit that shit that will burn the devil"
this line doesn't make sense at all...but if you would have changed the word "so" to "and" it would work in ya flows and it would make some sense

D BATE

You just need to elevate your rhymes man...I'm not beefin but seriously reading will help you get more complex...you may be just startin off..who knows.. but I've learned by peepin other battles that the "that,back,sky,die" rhymes just won't fly on this site...Check out the elevated front lines and peep some of the closed battles. You might be able to learn a thing or 2.

PEACE

Dis battle wuz tyght both guyz wuz doin dey thing but i'm leanin more towards K-Amazin