K.S.Trin vs lyrical KILLAH
 

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YO,I'm like a one man army,bout to single handely take down ur crew//
But that easy,cause they all touch each other,tape it..then call it blues//
Those faggots would neva get on the map,not even if they were tourists//
Your rhymes are gay,they more refreshing than a bottle of Sierra Mist//
You winning this battle gainst me,is like Bush winning another election//
My rhymes are that close to perfection,while you still having an erection//
Who u tring to fool with those rhymes,they be on TV,being advertised//
If I was u,I'd go disgiused,girls wouldn't like you if you were circumsized//
And you been battling Beatmasta k,that's not rap,that a battle of wits//
So stop playing NFL blitz,U fucked up,like a fat girl with no ass or tits//
You a wannabe Jay-Z,why you talk bout wearing a bady pad???//
Cause the only place you beem shot is on the ass by your own dad//

o..check it....check it...

Trin gettin' played, when I make my first move.../
Got you scared as shit to battle me, like ripley in alien two.../
Im a heavywight and trin is just plain Soft and Half Lame.../
And the Other Half Is just ass-cause you give new york a bad name.../(he from New York)
Im lyrical but your ass is far from being “Lyrical”.../
We could battle on your best day and beating me would still take a Mircale../
You can turn the whole world against me and ill still rip a nation.../
Cause if your not fuckin any of your relatives your not getting into ill
creationz.../
Kid is mettling where he shouldn't be, gosh golly curses.../
^nervous spelling error? na used the D to rate ur verses.../
Watch me do trin face like cardboard and try out my latest dances.../
You couldn't build a rep on this site frozen in rap battle stances .../
1 vote- 2 vote-3votes- clown me if a KO's ya mission.../
Please strip ya verse down only way that you gettin' poll position.../

holla atcha boy killah!!!!!!!

yo uppin for some votes plz explain well thx!

Goood spit on both of Ya's

Both had Punchlines One weaker than the other, But Structure n FLow made up for it..

Trin Bess Line-Who u tring to fool with those rhymes,they be on TV,being advertised//
If I was u,I'd go disgiused,girls wouldn't like you if you were circumsized

Killah's bess line-Im a heavywight and trin is just plain Soft and Half Lame.../
And the Other Half Is just ass-cause you give new york a bad name

Butt 'ma have to go with Killah.. Juss felt his flow a litle more (Honest vote)
V/-Killah

iight yo thx for the honest vote can we get some more well explain votes

Good battle y'all: breakdown
Trin:
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 5/10
Creativity: 5/10
Overall: 16/30
Killah:
Punches: 8/10
Personals: 6/10
Creativity: 6/10
Overall: 20/30
Vote: Killah
Killah came way harder in this one, plus he had better developed verse

yo ok...

ks... umm

ok your verse was good but you kept up with flow but you contradicted yourself... said his rhymes where gay... then said they where refreshing i dont really know what you were meanin by that just work on that kinda shit...

lyrical killah...
ok good punches and flow but work on da structure its like one long line one short if its like that it makes it hard to flow...but ur punches cam at an araye of people you need to personalize your shit make this kid feel whatchu bringen ....

ok k.s. 6/10

ok killah 7/10

close but killah gets my vote

ok check it

lyrical kid your opener was confusing i aint really catch it didnt make much since to me since i didnt understand maybe the wording was fucked our some shit and your closer was decent pretty creative an wrodplay was good the rest of ya verse had good punchs but didnt really have much else in it creativite was there in spots and so was absically everything else

trini your opener was nothin no real punch to me work on openin battles better and your closer was simple and the wording was messed up in it makes it hard to understand an dont know why the jay z was in there it didnt make since an the rest of your verse was ddecent had a few good punchs in it but not really consistent with hard punchs and lacked abunch of creativitie in your whole verse just elevate

vote lyrical

i forgot im on that kids blacklist

iight well thx anyway can we get somemore honest votes?

aight umm dis shit was wun sided

opener-killah even it barley ryhmed
structure-killah...k ya shit was da worst i eva seen
punchlines-killah
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-nun
enjoyed-killah...if u aint blind u could see he won dis k ya lines was every dogg i couldn't read da shit

my vote-killah

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