premination vs. sten. cell
 

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here....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119204

‘Sten’?…’cells’ dying since this ‘head’ hit the street…
send ya demo for viewin….they want the rights to the beat…
I leave you dead as the skin on the bottom of ya feet…
This kids bringin nothing.…like a blind mans greet…
took me a while, but now i know why 'u' in 'headphone murder'...
listen to ur verse and you take 'suicide' a step further...
nothin but an 'actor'...no laughtar at ya 'movie' punchlines...(check link at top)
like conker fights...
...u ain't got the 'nuts' wen it comes to crunchtime...
wiv my ‘methods’ of ‘murder’ I’ll kill you wiv no regret…
cos this the second murder in days to be broadcast on the net....(R.I.P)

Ya See The Win?,That Picture Is Fucking Blurry Like Amatuer Sex Tapes/
Sit & Spin Like "Twister" But Ill Put My Foot In Your Spot Wherever It Rotates/
Who's New Bitch?No New Tricks,Kid Like Sky Diving,Your Body's Free To Drop/
Forreal Kid Listen & Take Some Q-Tips Or Ill Make Your Breathe-N Stop
Label Me The Truth Cuz Ill Be Frank Kid I Dont Mean To Trouble You.../
But Fuck A Alias,Either Way Theres No Chance Of Your Getting D-W/
Disregard The Phrase,Even M & M's Come Better When Candy Coated.../
But Ya'll Gotta Be Shelled Nuts To Have False Words Quoted/
Im Ending Your Sad Song,Its Time That You Let Live And Learn.../
So Cut The Usher Kid,Even Morticians Will Just "Let It Burn"/

uppin...................

Rise.

slept on shit anyway here's my vote:

breakdown for premination:

flow:on through the whole peice pretty good job here 7/10

volcab:pretty basic nothing special 5/10

punches:"I leave you dead as the skin on the bottom of ya feet…" best line you got not too much else you tried to get personal an alright job 6/10

overall:18/30

breakdown for sten. cell:

flow:good job here no problems with it 7/10

volcab:nice a notch above your oppenent here solid job 7/10

punches:some good lines like,"Forreal Kid Listen & Take Some Q-Tips Or Ill Make Your Breathe-N Stop" you did a good job at addressing your oppenent from start to finish 8/10

overall:22/30

vote--sten. cell gets my vote

1-0 sten. cell wins