cels vs. vinman
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

checkin in but dont have time to spit right now

checking in?

iight fina spit


check it fina knock this furiosly he think his name is cels
but when im done throwing punches all he can see is the bells
my flow is so dangerous it can kill/ my flow is so tight im even given
cels some thrills(excitement)im knockin at his door and kicking him out
with his mama all night in a 10 round bout

will post thursday mourning

you got a lot of nerve to be 5-9 so fill this
my flows sick like aids aint no cure for the illiness
5 bars aint enuff to nick my shins
when i give you a growth spurt....5-9 to 5-10
IM NICE...way way nicer than all the others
cause carolinians take flight up against the wright brothers
cause aint no way yo flows hotter than mine? NOOOOOOO!!!
not even if you shitted um out and backwards outta yo asshole

i no u won i ws rushing nice verse though uppin

Ummm Vin should be DQ'ed he missed "Min"

Both of you guys need to elevate

Punches: Cels
Flow: Cels, Vinman was choppy and all ova the place.
Personals: Cels The 5-9 to 5-10 was the only decent bar in the whole battle
Vocab: No one, neither one of y'all can even spell
Opener: Cels, other one sucked
Closer: Neither, both sucked
Multis: Neither

Cels wins because he had the only thing even resembling a decent line in the whole battle. Both of y'all need to work on just about everything, all categories.

V/Cels

vote - cels

blah.... that other kid sucks ass

man what was the he thinkin when he battled cells ya know....dogg you need to elevate before you come back in here/

i dont have to explain it/....to much

v/cels

v/cels cuz he just won...

elevate guys, you are self glorifying and not punching...


in a boxing match, you dont see the guy standing on the ropes gettin the crows to scream...thats wrestling.

now please, resume wackness

breakdown for vinman:

flow:it worked but really basic 6/10

volcab:nothing really 5/10

punches:you threw nothing personal and what you had has been done since the don of time in rap battles nothing new 4/10

overall:15/30

breakdown for cels:

flow:alright still basic though 5/10

volcab:slightly better then your oppenent but that's where it stops 6/10

punches:best line,"when i give you a growth spurt....5-9 to 5-10" personal nothing else really 7/10

overall:18/30

vote--cels gets my vote just way better

that's it too 5-0 cels wins