cesus jhist vs. lyrikal havoc
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

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check.......

out of this wack league...

This Newbie Stinks Im a Fully Rape The Hoe//
Need To Flip Dictionary Definitions to see if Jesus Can Flow//
Im contradicting this kid prove i wrecked em//
checked em, You Couldnt Move Your Shit with a Spasming Rectum//
Watch me draw lines round this bastard, slip n' snap necks//
This kid Needs to Buy World War Recounts to receive Veteran Text//
Says "Ready to die"...Watch As I Expose This Jews Pride//
He Can Only Dream Of Writers "Block"...THE RENTS TOO HIGH!!!//
Sick of this Math Geek With no Skills to be had,chance to be grabbed//
i may as well Rape You With Knifes the way this Asshole Gets Stabbed//

i spelled contradicting wrong...

Im impressed
this battle wasnt all that bad
Lyrikal Havok came better than I expected
with some good punches like "the rent too high" line and the "anal shit" line
bu, it wasnt enough
Cesus overwhelm him
with stronger punches
he had the opener-which MIGHT have been played but still was quite humorous
the bench warmer line did it and also the air-o was good wordplay
v/Cesus

Like I said, this would be a tight battle.

"Hes got a bow of rhymes unequipped...the bone without the marrow
so we did a circle in my plane...and it was his only air-o..."

Sick wordplay, punch itself isn't that much, but wordplay is excellent, nice. And this:

"Lyrical havok, get off my team...you fuckin wack rhyme whorder
his ass is realy on fire!...but its because hes the bench warmer...
He tries too hard to get game time...but hell never get paid
so he put "lyrical" in his name...and now he gets played..."

Tight. Cesus gets this one, but it was pretty close... the writer's block thing was damn nice.. but Cesus did overwhelm him, just had more quality quotables.

breakdown for cesus jhist:

flow:good job nothing too advance but it worked 7/10

volcab:better then average you seemed to put some effort into this often overlooked aspect of a verse alright good 6/10

punches:some nice lines, nothing to strong best,"his ass is realy on fire!...but its because hes the bench warmer..." keep up on it 7/10

overall:20/30 solid verse no problems with it

breakdown for lyikal:

flow:nice internal rhyming in the middle there too bad you didn't stick to it highlight of your verse 7/10

volcab:good job here you edged jhist out here 7/10

punches:this wasn't too much of a highlight you had a couple of lines but there were mainly played best,"checked em, You Couldnt Move Your Shit with a Spasming Rectum// " more of cause of the volcab and internal rhyming cause it's alittle played 5/10


overall:19/30 you had mechanics like flow and volcab down just need to work on them puches

vote--cesus jhist gets this just edged it out thanks to his punches

This Newbie Stinks Im a Fully Rape The Hoe//
Need To Flip Dictionary Definitions to see if Jesus Can Flow//
^^^good punch.....7
Im contradicting this kid prove i wrecked em//
checked em, You Couldnt Move Your Shit with a Spasming Rectum//
^^good wordplay........7

Watch me draw lines round this bastard, slip n' snap necks//
This kid Needs to Buy World War Recounts to receive Veteran Text//
&^^^hahah..funny shit...good bar.......8.5
Says "Ready to die"...Watch As I Expose This Jews Pride//
He Can Only Dream Of Writers "Block"...THE RENTS TOO HIGH!!!//
^^^GOOD BAR.....PUNCH/.........8
Sick of this Math Geek With no Skills to be had,chance to be grabbed//
i may as well Rape You With Knifes the way this Asshole Gets Stabbed//
...GOOD FINISHER..........8

God damn lyrical, you play to much...be like me and spit furious
cant believe I had to kill you...so you would get dead serious
^^^DIDN'T REALLY RYHME.....WEAK OPENER.........6
Hes got a bow of rhymes unequipped...the bone without the marrow
so we did a circle in my plane...and it was his only air-o...
..GOOD PUNCH........7
Hes proud of his net image...and known for being plain and lies
your rhymes are a catastrophe...battles is where your name applies!
???????????///....U LOST ME..........5
Lyrical havok, get off my team...you fuckin wack rhyme whorder
his ass is realy on fire!...but its because hes the bench warmer...
^^^FIRST LINE?...2ND WAS BETTER...6
He tries too hard to get game time...but hell never get paid
so he put "lyrical" in his name...and now he gets played...
GOOD FINISHER.....7

Do The Math......
31-cesus....
38.5....havok

Vote = Lyrical Havok

cesus took this....but a real tight battle, liked the anal shit line from havok n you ad a tight verse to man but i just thought cesus ad equally if not beta punches n beta personals....close battle but cesus takes it...pz

v/cesus

Look…I think that lyrical havok took this one just by a bit because he had way better personals and punches…cesus is a tough competitor for a newb but he didn’t come hard enough...

v/lyrical havoc

out of this wack league...