lman_1528 vs. dirtboy69
 

shit i did it again forgot to give someone a battle anyway your fighting me

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

checkin in..............

check i'll have my verse by the end of the day probably after i get back from work tonight

cut lman with my punches hittin like randomly done incisions//
tear this kid up i'm gettin handed all of the voters decisions//
kid's feeling more pain then gettin surgery done without anesthetics//
destory this little kid i don't care how it was that shadow predicts//
constantly hiding in the dark your verse over shadowed by mine//
when you left the league i was happy not having to read another line//
in fact i think everyone was and you should take it as a fucking sign//
even in the front lines you can't get votes pm'ing for them beggin//
kid's only 13 saying he's gonna kill me, the whole idea is ridiculous//
your lines senseless when they work it's cause there bitten it's obivous//
nursery rhymes your shit's on level with elementary this guy's a novice//
after this only seeing lamn_1528 in the sign out thread in the front office//

waiting on you

I might only be 13 but an 8 year old could beat you//
you've been rhyming for 2 years and i still manage to defeat you//
even shadow thinks i'm goin to win he might as well be a fortune teller cuz he predicted the win//
your probubly enjecting some heroin cuz my punches are hittin harder than ever//
even if only one of em hit you'ld be knocked out forever//
even though i'm 13 i'm a convicted fellon in over 3 states//
i've commited more homocides than you'll ever see, even if you live in New York state//
you're probubly contumplating suicide because after this battle your record will be 5-7//
and then you'll have to admit you can't rapbattle//

Breakdown:
Punches: Dirt
Metas: Neither
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: Dirt
Disses: Dirt


Overall-Kinda Weak Battle.Neither Of The Two Had And Credible Complexity Or Punches But Dirt Takes This One.His Puns And Disses Get Him This One.Iman Came Too Weak.He Talked To Much In His Verse And Didnt Target His Opponent Enough.A Lot Of His Lines Were Fillers & The Rest Were Weak Punches.Some Lines Didnt Even Rhyme.Nice Try To Youngin....

Vote- DirtyBoy69

Whoa wtf, I thought lman had some semblence of skill. I was wrong. Very wrong. Very, very wrong. Dirtboy wins, because his verse didn't start like this:

"
I might only be 13 but an 8 year old could beat you//
you've been rhyming for 2 years and i still manage to defeat you//
even shadow thinks i'm goin to win he might as well be a fortune teller cuz he predicted the win//"

His verse also rhymed for the most part and had punches. These are good things for a verse to have. Yours did not, lman.

This was an obvious win for dirtboy.......no real need for a breakdown..

Vote - Dirtboy

aight check it

dirtboy
flow:7/10
wordusage:7/10
vocab:4/10
creativitie:5/10
punches:6/10
opener:6/10
closer:6/1
0verall:41/70

comment:dogg for a mod.you aint that good..i thought you would be..elevate on vocab..boring shit is well...boring

fav/line:nothing

lman:
flow:6/10
wordusage:6/10
vocab:5/10
creativitie:6/10
punches:6/10
opener:5/10
closer:6/10
overall:40/70

comment:i liked urs coz for u coz ur shit was entertaining....but not enough

fav/line:nothin

v/dirtboy

yo i do got some skillz..... and this was one of my weakiest battles next week i will do betta........

dirtboy merked him but the other cat was wack, neither were great but dirts was way beta on this occasion...pz

v/dirt

will ya hit up my battle wiv sten cell, not one vote yet n hot battle, honest vote, thanx

4-0 that last vote wasn't reallly explained looking to finish this

cut lman with my punches hittin like randomly done incisions//
tear this kid up i'm gettin handed all of the voters decisions//
6/10
kid's feeling more pain then gettin surgery done without anesthetics//
destory this little kid i don't care how it was that shadow predicts//
8/10 good personal and punch
constantly hiding in the dark your verse over shadowed by mine//
when you left the league i was happy not having to read another line//
7/10
in fact i think everyone was and you should take it as a fucking sign//
even in the front lines you can't get votes pm'ing for them beggin//
6/10
kid's only 13 saying he's gonna kill me, the whole idea is ridiculous//
your lines senseless when they work it's cause there bitten it's obivous//
6.5/10
nursery rhymes your shit's on level with elementary this guy's a novice//
after this only seeing lamn_1528 in the sign out thread in the front office//
lol 9/10

nice structure solid drop

I might only be 13 but an 8 year old could beat you//
you've been rhyming for 2 years and i still manage to defeat you//
hmmmmmm 3/10
even shadow thinks i'm goin to win he might as well be a fortune teller cuz he predicted the win// 2/10 not sure that rhymed
your probubly enjecting some heroin cuz my punches are hittin harder than ever//
even if only one of em hit you'ld be knocked out forever//
4/10
even though i'm 13 i'm a convicted fellon in over 3 states//
i've commited more homocides than you'll ever see, even if you live in New York state//
lol 4/10
you're probubly contumplating suicide because after this battle your record will be 5-7//
and then you'll have to admit you can't rapbattle//huh 0/10

WHACK

v/dirtboy

5-0 that's it i win this is closed