-untitled- vs Tony S-E-L-F<Witness this yall>
 

u know the drill........................

ima gonna hurt you with some lethal dose of my poetic devices//
its acidic, it'l melt ya mouth from the spit i inflict on your pathetic disguises//
step down from the podium, you should 'tone yaself' back on track//
i thought da 'dark nights' were bad, this 'tony self's' wack//
maybe he's by 'himself' cuz he dont know where his home is//
lately he's 'writin-shelves' of punches, try to impress but he aint got no 'homies'//
choices of werds to produce pain, his lame techniques 'writes off his fame'//
this nigga rapps like a bitch, this guy wont know what he's talkin bout that he'l 'bite his own name'//
quit barkin 'dawg', you'll embarass this thrd with ya 'joints of shame'//
i wouldnt be surprise if ya mom disowned you cuz of ya 'pointless name'//

U must be crazy askin to battle im like movin targets
i got punches to levetate ya just like magic carpets

irregardless of this.. i spit like bullets from magnums
quikly out the clip shit just snip em and tag em

call yourself -untitled- .... must just be undecided
sayin "should i stay pussy or continue dick ridin"

couldn t fight if it was ur last fuckin chance at life
besides..... mom didnt really mean ta have ya ass right????????

just proves u shouldn t be here..... should be taken his own life
not worth the drop of seamon .....waisted on em that one nite

This battle was good I enjoyed it.
Both yall niggaz bought your spit 2 da table properly.Good shit.
Untitled I was feelin your verse.It floed smoother than chocalate.
Your punches wasn't as strong as your opponents but they was cool.
Hottest line:
"I'm gonna hurt you with some lethal dose of my poetic devices//
It's acidic,It'll melt your mouth from the spit I inflict on your pathetic disguises//"
Worst line:
"Quit barking dawg,You'll embariss this thread wit your points of shame//
I wouldn't be surprised if your mom disowned you cuz of your pointless name//"

Tony I was feelin your verse too.All but 1 line was directed straight at your opponenet.
Hottest line:
"Call yourself untitled...maybe just undecided
sayin should i stay pussy or continue dick riding"
Worst line:
"Irregardless of this..I spit like bullets from magnums
Quickly out the clip shit just snip em and tag em"

Both of yall repped but i'm goin wit Tony for constant and consistent personals in every line.

vote=Tony self
swing thru here and peep this fellaz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122780

ima gonna hurt you with some lethal dose of my poetic devices//
its acidic, it'l melt ya mouth from the spit i inflict on your pathetic disguises//

^^^ lots of vocab and rhymin..but it ain't hittin him hard

quit barkin 'dawg', you'll embarass this thrd with ya 'joints of shame'//
i wouldnt be surprise if ya mom disowned you cuz of ya 'pointless name'//


^^ nice rhyming..but your trying to dazzle your opponent, not knock him out...sup wit dat?

U must be crazy askin to battle im like movin targets
i got punches to levetate ya just like magic carpets


^^^ good opener..w/nice imagery

just proves u shouldn t be here..... should be taken his own life
not worth the drop of seamon .....waisted on em that one nite

^^ decent closer


Vote: Tony...punches actually landed


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rofl
vote tonyself
he owned him in my opinion
it seems like untitled tried too hard to get this
but Tony just threw out some quick punches to end this
untitled, try to shorten your bars also
both of you need to elevate though
v/Tony

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123431
hit that up

im allllwaysssss loosin in punches.lol
oh well gotta elevate

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Alright untitled, you had some nice punches but structure helps you hit harder. If you have a crisp line it adds the impact of it. Otherthan that you wrote an okay vote nothign over the top hot.
Flow: 5/10
Punches: 4/10
Personals: 3/10
Metas: 3/10
Multies: 3/10
Wordplay: 5/10
Overall: 23/60

Tony

This was a pretty hot verse, you had consistent punches and a few really good ones. The opener was a nice one and you had solid punches all the way through. One suggestion maybe throw one more bar in it read kinda short, and the begginer was a bit weaker than the end but nice drop.

Flow: 6/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 5/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Overall: 36/60
Vote: Tony