d-bate loses... i mean vs. accomplishment
 

your gay...

10 lines....

go first

Walk on Stage, turn the Mic on, clear my throat, and drop another bomb/
Accomplishment, it's on, by the time you finish, I'm long gone/
you wont even see my dust, kuz I never stop, till I bust a nut/
so fuck you, and your crumby ass crew, and just keep doin, what pussies Do/
by the end of this, you will know, D-bate is the name, and I spit fo Sho'/
you aint Biggie, so stop Pretendin, if I aint the champ, Im bound to be Contendin'/
bitch, keep runnin, while you got them Tendons, kuz after this, your life is endin'/
the only games I play, are for nintendo, Im like snoop, smokin that Endo/
these lines are Prime, and yours are shit, tryin to rhyme? pussy get with it/
and just for closin, I'd like to say, Im the only one Chosen

you gonna post????????????????????????????????.....

Fuck off i just got home....


Aight...
Don't fight me...

wit no fuss i bust him in his face...he takes dis shit...
ahh.. i'm sicka theese lil kids...fight back bitch.../
dismantel this member...cuz his verse is full of shit lika diaper dispenser...
kids mom checks to see if his verse has been cenosored.../
kids awful...thinks he's ganster...its not that...
cuz the only caps you poppin are on soda can pop tabs.../
you don't offend me...but the shit is eatin this gully...
cuz my verse replays in ya head so you can't rest again peacefully.../
i'ma cunning lynguist but to this kid i just wing it...
cuz when i'm out killen kids you just think it.../

haha bia bia

haha, big up man, big up I think I just got my Ass Kicked :shoot:

Uppin............................................. ........

yeah proolly uppin for votes... the human fly

lol cool battle

opener-acc....d ya shit aint ryhme dunn
structure-acc
punchlines-acc...da diaper shit
wordplay-nun
personals-nun
enjoyed-acc...ofcourse other dude aint have no creativity in ya verse it was madd basic nahmen and u wasn't goin at him dat hard pause...acc i know u was taken it easy on em cuzz he knew but u could came alil sickah dunn

my vote-acc

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up for votes man...

ok break down

flow=accomp
punches=accomp
open=accomp
close=accomp
structure=none
this battle was just on sided accomplishment just simply merked this nigga his accomplishment could have used 1 line and stll would have one damn d-bate plz elevate vote=accomp

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hahahhaa, u both suck balls, that shit was bad, but d bate yo shit was worse thats all i'm votin on, who didn't suck so damn much so....
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pp2 you suck bitch... uppin ................. you can't compare to me

D-bate won
you need to go at the opunite more
good flow
other kid who the fuck you ko ha just playing liked it but i gotta pic some one to lose.

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Thats a Straight D/R

aight
 

accomplishment, you came mad weak like ya said, and ya still took it for having punches and rhyming, also took creativity and wordplay

d-bate- shit was stretched as fuck, only bar ya really coulda worked with was
"you aint Biggie, so stop Pretendin, if I aint the champ, Im bound to be Contendin'/
bitch, keep runnin, while you got them Tendons, kuz after this, your life is endin'/" it sucked but there was a little potential
ya need ta add more creativity and turn all those lines into punches