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ok d-bate tha rulez
8-12 bars

honest votez
usual shit
blind spit

30 mins time limit/or d/q :gfy:
after we both chk in

aight this is ma chk in ....30mins dog gud luk........................................

All T-storm does is chit chat, back up, or I grip the Gat/
have your ass, stankin up, in the back, of my cadilac/
So joke, I let it rip, till I here that click/
then I just load another clip, and bust till your body goes limp/
thats how I handle my shit, kuz Imma muh fuckin PIMP!/
T be wastin my patience, he aint safe like homeplate/
he aint hype like me, kuz I dont play no fuckin games/
I hate to say, but your ass cant stay, no way/
your goin up in smoke, toke, hope and pray, I dont walk your way/
you aint on my level, im the Bass you the trebel/
I make noice, and cause trouble, fuckin wit me? kill ya on the double/
this verse is done, votes in, kuz T-storm WONT WIN!!!

haha big up on that one man, how old are you BTW??

ok upin 4 votes......return da favour.........................................

uppin............................................. ....

this
was
a
weak
ass
battle
v/t-storm for attempting to throw a punch
both of you need to elevate
seriously
work on punches
and after you have that down pack
work on some creativie punches
try to keep line length the same
and overall
just dont be wack
anyway like I said
v/t storm

ok upin.............................................. .................................................. .....

uppin............................................. ..

Im gonna give this 1 to t-storm it wasnt a really intesnse battle d-bate u kept dopin self gloryfied verses this is a battle prove how good u are wit punches & shit there is a cypher for that. T was the only 1 really who tried to put in a punch verses on both sides were basic and i think elevation is the word im lookin for

V/T-Storm

Aiight nobody swung at one another. It was like watching boxers dance around the ring. Yea'll need some multis and flow to. Ya flow was whack. But i give dis one to T-storm. He thereew a punch, evn if it was weak.

vote-t-storm

Return da favor (in mah sig)

this bitch postin at me sayin im fucked-up/
u dnt know me dog,so fuck u, your lucks-up/
coz ma lyrical-wit be devouring ya shit-spit/
my verbal-heat b licking at u like blazin-flames/
destroying ur nervous system so ur punches swing,wit-no-aims/
this cat only 16, ima show his hoe a real man/
n that aint up 4 d-bate,im make this bitch watch, n fukin mas-ur-bate
i`ll have the young hoe ridin on ma dick like a tsu-nami/
makin tidal waves in ya bed when im fukin her virgin pu-nani/
so fuck this bitch reresentin from tha"bank"/
after he sees my spit...h`ell probablly b desperate 4 a yank!!!/
yo tahts' pretty sick for a rrook

this tstorm got some potential..good flow...need more personals...good shit though...i like the wit dog...not people got it in them...and also not many people get so...but keep doin it...

and now for dbate...
hmmm...where to start...well i wasn't feelin your verse...talking about guns...and allthat shit...no punches...no personals...decent flow...but i mean it was kinda over by then...how some jokes or disses against your opponent... i really didn't see any!

v - tstorm

ma vote goes to t storm. tha other dude ddnt have n e punches in his verse, he juz rapped bout killing him. man punches practically win tha battle for you. u need to have a lot of punches in text. so i vote t storm

vote = t storm