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D-Bate VS. NY State of Mind!!
10 Lines,
no d/r no crew votes no beef votes you spit first |
Straight From The Godfather...
Yo How's Da Election? Fuck That, I'm Here To Battle Instead I Beat You So Fast It's Almost Like My Internet Connection And When I'm At Ya Path, There's No Protection For My Retaliation You Be So Corny, I Would Think You're That Chicken From Da +Corn Flakes+ Box And My Blows Be So Nice, You Be Callin Me A Asian Wild Ox I'm Givin You 10 Lines Of Action Be So Slick There's No Friction, Ya Bitch I'm Mackin NY Iz Where I'm From Get It Right So Brilliant It's Like A Shine From A Transluscent Light |
NY? listen to this guy/
claimin he's a killer, no need to Lie/ All Mind does, is keep on talkin/ he keeps it up, then he a dead man walkin/ soon time to find a site, to lay you down to rest/ that flicker is your lite, thats what happens, fuckin wit the best/ and who is you Mackin, kuz your not a pimp/ Im gonna be smackin, leavin you walkin wit a limp/ NY State of Mind, thinkin he's Nas, WAKE UP/ keep playin like that, Gon' get your Muh Fuckin Head BUST! |
first off
nas is and influence i'm not a bita pay respect 2 illmatic uppin 4 votes |
Man, it's a freestyle, lol, but anyways, good shit man
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wow ok i battled both of you newbs aight... so here is my decision
ny state of mine.. you gotta rap shit that makes sense and with less filler like the cornflakes box lines couldnt been better... try like this... pussy bitch runnin as i pop deese shots.... seen less of a chicken on da corn flakes box.../ coulda made that line ill... you feelin me... ok.. d bate.. ok verse bur you still lack complexity... like rhymen with pimp with limp that isnt allowed but you still came with one punch i think ... ok ny came with mmore complexity yet his shit was fucked up in places so he gets my vote ny |
Both Where Wak jsut Rapped Cuz It Rymed
Thiz Line About Been Corny was Corny You Be So Corny, I Would Think You're That Chicken From Da +Corn Flakes+ Box But Wibns Thiz Wak ass Battle |
I don't know both of these needed some work, and a great deal of work, no real solid punches although both looked lilke the same verse, short, short bars and sorta bunk. I give this one to D bate cause his punches seemed to hit a little harder
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ny state of mind i give you my vote off top b/c you took it to him from the opening. not the best but good enought to beat him. alright punches and shit-could do better, but his verse was shitty.return the fava
vote=ny state of mind. |
D-Bate won for better rhymes and put the // at the end of the lines.
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D-Bate = 30/50
Flow 6/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 6/10 Humor 6/10 NY.State.Of.Mind = 28/50 Flow 5/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 5/10 Punches 6/10 Humor 6/10 Good Battle
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i like d-bate because he had betta punches and rhymed more
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Vote=D-Bate
That battle was wack.Wasn't really nothing to say about except I was feeling D-Bate more.Hit my battle up \/ |
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