Eric89 vs murdahu
 

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No D/R

ur rymes aint sick they malnourished/ ill show up to ur crib wit clips and spit verses/u should give up/ cause ur petty rymes are worthless/I be the reason why your dome is leaken/Beat eric down wit a bat till hes quadropledgic/ cant speak and his eyes is uneven/ call ur crew cause ill battle them too/ ur rymes elemntary/ somebody replace this dude/ listen i need competition/ eric the type a dude that beats off to missy pictures/ i spit no frills shit when i spill/ i knock ur lights out like an unpaid edison bill/ as a matter a fact i jus spatered ur rap/ ill pull out ur teeth and let mice crawl through the gap/ i can spit so quick i make time frezze/ then rehearse then reverse it and call it a free/ ur brain moves slow so u don't know what i mean/ i would freeze time than rehearse my ryme/when did spit it would seem off the mind

nice try but ima have to spit this at ya

yo i spit more dirty verses then a robber steels goochy purses
my punchlines will leave you with a concussion
they'll leave u blushin, then all bloody and gushin
u talkin about me beatin off to missy pictures
well its better then beatin off to cartoon stickers
o by the way whyd u make ur name murdahu
ill be the one murdah'n u, cutin u up, then makin a stew
my verses and rhymes so ill they'll make ya face turn blue
u spit so slow, by the time u be done spittin the cheese will have grown mold
i got a little sister that can spit better than u and shes three years old!

yo people uppin for votes plz thanks

uppin people

can we get some votes plz. if u gonna view the battle u might as well just vote on it common now. thanks

eric won this a little better to read and not as confusing but props to both of u

punches, structure, flow, and origanallity go to eric, although multis, amd verage go to murdah my honest vote eric

Yo fallenangel and Ja'e Roc thanks for the vote. Lets keep the votes commin people

Murdahu-bad structure,nice flow,good punches,not that creativite or complex
Best line-eric the type a dude that beats off to missy pictures/
i spit no frills shit when i spill/
Worst Line- i would freeze time than rehearse my ryme/when did spit it would seem off the mind/

Eric-far too simple.flow was OK though.
Best line-noone
Worst line-all of it was sumtin a 5th grader could come up with

Vote-Murdahu
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123302
^^^^drop a vote in my battle

eric got this he had better punches and flow.he also had a way netter struturemudah u got to fix yors aor uever gonna win.besides workin o punchs and structure you'll e tight

vote:eric

Eric 89
weak verse, but you still did enough to come out on top in this battle..
Murdah your structure sucked
set up your verse like this

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the way you had it made it hard to read and follow with a decent flow to it
Eric also had better punches..
so v/eric
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121587
hit that up

uppin for votes

Eric came aight but was to me quite basic but still gets my vote coz Murderhu ur structure was ALL OVER THE PLACE this really made it difficult to read and i think it let u down. Eric had good punches but could do better.

V/Eric