feed bak plz
 

dno gimme sum feed bak yall n holla @ a plya 1 time big pimpin

i run niggaz//oldniggaz young niggaz// dnt matta//bitch u aint a rapper// u aint got no rhymes// how u get a huney tht fine// ima av to embarris u n make her mine// hit em wit evy line// bussin cleans ma guns n make shine//me n u lik tupac n biggie//but instead its microker n piggie// u twiged yet// dnt matta wat gun i use im still gunna buss to yah chest//u cnt fink boi u pantin// sur u dnt wanna sit down n take a rest//i melest girls n test em by the firmness of thy brest//dnt mess. wit me// ull get reked see//u a playa h8r fake ass muthafukin g// u fink u da fukin american dream but we all no u gettin ur lyrics frm a old underground hip hop team//like the king jay z// i buss on rappers make dem worship me//rest in peace to jam master jay// cus u n big ll both got blasted away//n past away//evy thurd wurd its a rhyme// me n ma bitch go together like lemon n line//plz god am i gunna b ok sho me a sine (continued wen i get feed bak) :shoot:

nice
 

not bad,not bad at all.was quite fun to read.i like the rhyming too,its simple but it works.and that breast line was pretty comical.not bad at all mate....peace....

ooooohhhhhhwweeeeeeee, dawg, I couldnt hardly get where ya lines ended and began, all in all it was ok, I just had a hard time readin it.. the breast line was cool.

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Elevate' Kiid My Advice To You lol

safe yo can i get som mor feedbak

Yo dog good rhymin but just hit Enter every time you finish a line to make it easyier
to read other than that keep it gangsta Peayce!!

safe can i hav sum more feedbak