N-SIGHT vs. AKA
 

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no crew/hate/dr votes...no verse feedin


u spit first and i'll soon follow

or...vs. due in 1 hour...which eva comes first nah mean


check n BISH if u agree wit terms

ok checkin in here forreal. let give um some thing rough.

ok yo check it
you even try startin a battle with me then you gonna be a moving target//
you think you hot but your lyrics got rejected from the black market//
after you fuck with me your name gonna mean no sight//
nah you ain’t dying but I am the blinding white light//
I was being nice I just wanted you to know//
The I got two big things on me that are easy to blow//
One of then is a dick and the other is a gun//
But if you fuck with me then both of them will be on you son//
Dawg how you gonna battle me when you don’t even know who you dissing//
You can make a whole song about me but I ain’t gonna listen//

ok dawg it your turn to go. i think you need to do it by 5/11/04 or it a over

WOULD YOU VOTE ON THIS BATTLE AND HELP A BROTHA OUT ILL RETURN THE FAVOR JUST DROP ME A LINK AND ILL VOTE RIGHT AWAY HERES MY LINK

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=110959

ill return when yall done spittin

lol...aiyo, first off..

Ur verse is 'lackin wordplay' like u lost ur 'scrabble pieces'..-
My 'criminal flow' 'weighs heavy'..dats why I'm like 'conceited'..-(con/seated)
And ur style is rusty unicyle..'ONE-TIRED' 'piece of 'shit'..-
U can set-up camp around my dick..but i gotta charge u weekly rent..-
Fact of the matter is..your name is 'settin' up future events'..-
Like u was prepared for it..Wack Kid-A.K.A.-"He got ripped"..-(name change)
Tha fuck u thinkin' bitch challengin 'SIGHT wit a simple verse..-
My flow..niggas wouldn't 'boo dis' if I dropped in a Temple First..- (bhuddist)
Ur rhymes are dismal..I'm callin this the see-saw battle of text..-
Cuz our records are unbalanced..urs goin right mine hang to tha left..-(win/losses)


fuck outt huuuuuuuur

ok here goes.......
yall had a decent battle but honestly due to
inconsitantcy in aka flows is why -N- took it
yall both did very well but -n- was fire on tis
really well rounded .....from format to wordplay
but yall keep strivin

Good battle fellas Breakdown:

AKA......man that was a weak verse for real son, you lacked any real punches throughout the whole verse, didn't have any wordplay, no metas, or even multies in your verse, man you need to elevate
Flow: 7/10
Punches: 3/10
Personals: 3/10
Metas: 3/10
Multies: 2/10
Wordplay: 3/10
Overall: 21/60

Breakdown for N sight:

Good verse I see your getting a lot better, you had good worplay an metas throughout the verse those were big pluses, your punches could have been stronger, an you didn't really have any personals, you had a couple solid multies, pretty good verse overall
Flow: 7/10
Punches: 5/10
Personals: 4/10
Metas: 8/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Overall: 37/60
Vote: N sight

v/N-Sight for a better verse
Sights verse was just ore creative than AKA's
and thats what got him the win

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...874#post1279874

Alright AKA, you were throwing punches but they were wack as hell. All that shit about a moving target and a black market thats kinda a weak opener, and then there was some shit about a dick or somthing? I don't know nice flow, but work on the rest
Flow: 6/10
Punches: 4/10
Personals: 3/10
Metas: 2/10
Multies: 2/10
Wordplay: 5/10
Overall: 22/60

N-Sight

This was a pretty hot verse, you had consistent punches and a few really good ones. The opener was a nice one.
Flow: 7/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 6/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Overall: 38/60
Vote: N sight

Oh the link is to my battle can you return the favour and drop on that

aight dis was wun sided so i aint really gota explain it

opener-N
strcuture- a tie both ya'll shit was aight
punchlines-N
creativity-N....ak u had nun dunn
wordplay-nun
multi's-nun
flow-umm everybody had they own so dis dont really count
finisher-N....dat shit was hott
enjoyed-N...he a real battle verse and aka ya shit was just basic ass fukk dunn

my vote-N

retunr da favor ya'll da link is my sig...GON