freestyle-little bout me...rate please
 

see im not very bright/
but i know how to fight/
so u better stay outa my sight/
dont come up to me in day light/
cuz ill cut u open wit a knife/
im the kinda guy to take ur girl or fuck ya wife/
takin over the U.S like i was the president/
hidin bombs and nukes inside of my resident/
thats where i get all of my pussy/
dotn even try to push-me/
or ill smash u and make u kinda mushy/
hit u with mother fucking synonyms/
faster then women-swims/
gotta stay hard cuz this is the reality/
cuz u gonna go through a lot of brutality/
yea maybe what i do isnt very legal/
like shootin yo ass wit a desert eagel/

just a bit of constructive crit..Try to rhyme off of a few more words than just your last one...some would consider this an A B rhyme.... and put a little more flow in it. get some sway to ya words..instead of just duh duh duh dot// duh duh duh dot// ya feel me, props for just puttin it out there, Drop another and I'll be here

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aight thanks...uppin

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