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3rd-Shift 05-10-04 10:01 PM

Mic-Wrecker vs. MC Murder
 
16 bar max(32 linez)
no feeding
dick riding
hate or crew votes
only explained votes

check in an spit

3rd-Shift 05-10-04 10:09 PM

u sed u wanted 2 spit 1st so heres yo oppurtunity to prove somethin
o yea checkin in

mc murder 05-10-04 10:21 PM

This ngaz overrated-think'n he made it but wid' RB in his basement,His stylez fabricated
like bin laden tapes theres no escape from this payment,Hits my fist like pavement,
leav'n an engravement- Gets clapped for being blatant,Sufferz Enslavement whatz you wanna do
I own his Pink-Slip statement, n his album sales r lower than George Bushes IQ.

Cat packs Fake gun chainz from swapmeets-Couldn't beat me if we Swapped BEatz
Imma elite unique MC with suites-you a petite simplistic repeat dead-beat
Crossed in a dead-heat who tried to bite Red-Meat,on a PMS peak,think'n u chosen
Now you in a Dead-Sleep For try'n to FUCK with my technique,cuzyour ego's smaller than mY scrotum

Your crewz got no clues - bin threw a couple lousy feuds with sum newbz dude,
Now you glued to get screwed - beat'n n bruised, leave ya tounge-sore,
My lyrical cyclones cut chordz. like swordz - ur ez rhymerz make me wanna flush more,

Hands his audio like food to needy -he gets around like pussy thatz real sleezy,-
once in his pussy pull'n out is not EZ, and He cant flow like Shaq cant Freethrow believe me,
Check the factz in an almanac - LA is all an act thaz back to back bitches,
You the dipstick of lyrical snitches - who can't spin recordz labeled guiness,

Pop you like ballons helium - or gunz sicilian - you dnt measure the closest,
All 4 of em suck <ock for milk swarm like locust I spread shellz like lotion,
I'm rubust and they see that they all pointless like no cars in GTA3 its bogus,
I'm inhumane u Whack notion, and they all hopeless like RosIe O' Donnel doin' Aerobics,

3rd-Shift 05-10-04 10:56 PM

look i give this nigga an inch an he takes a mile//
i tell him prove himself with his spit BUT even that aint worthwile//

just another bastard rappar, hip-hop orphan//
instead of norturin a waste of LIFE ya momma shuld-a-had ya ass aborted//

or at least child supported, butt attackin me u bound to fall//
wit a penis smaller than ya IQ u better off poppin the cherry off a blow up doll//

i mean wat kind of nigga admits he's impotent//
it really shows that he's not lyriclly or even mental competent//

jus limp like martin in the bad boys sequal//
beatin his dick like it owe him cash but all he gettin is a ball an a jingle// :laugh:

im one step ahead mentally quick so keep up wit my pace//
yo structure is like sperm on ya mom's face, all over da place// :laugh:

look nigga u faker than a silocone GUN, tryin to bargain for talent but u still cant get NONE//just havin no FUN in the rap game//so u try to "play" along wit rinky dink rhymes but its only gonna get u slain//

by an emcee like me, a tru emcee murker//
look i shuld change my name to urs to show the public how to really COMMITT EMCEE MURDER//(ooh shit)

yo flow is like a back-sliding preacher long winded and yells but has no point//
better yet like a ja rule single, ppl tired of ya voice :laugh:

damn i would suck if i had to be a part of RB's welcoming committe//
caz members wuld leave after they wuld get slaughtered by me//

so take this a lesson mutha fucka dont let yo ambition get out of its place//
caz if u find a nigga hotter than me spittin u starin satan in the face//

catch up
1st degree
emcee murder
uppn 4 votes

accomplishment 05-11-04 12:02 AM

yo i'ma have to give this battle to mc murder even though i didnt like his structure his punches came a little harder... he also had multies unlike mic...mic ive seen better if you would have came with the complexity you usually do this would have been closer...

vote mc muder

mc murder 05-11-04 09:43 AM

yo we need more vote up in here ..............................................,... .........................

Raphael 05-11-04 11:02 AM

aight check it

mic-wrecker
flow:7/10
wordusage:6/10
vocab:6/10
punches:7/10
creativity:6/10
opener:6/10
closer:6/10
overall:44/70

Comment:aight dogg i thought that you had him in some catagories but they were the important ones

fav/line:wasnt one

mc murder:
flow:6/10
wordusage:8/10
vocab:6/10
punches:4/10
creativity:5/10
opener:6/10
closer:6/10
overall:37/70

Comment:dogg ive seen better of you, your punches and vocab need to elevate.

fav/line:wasnt one

v/mic

The Godfather 05-11-04 11:07 AM


This Waz A Good Battle And You Made Me Read Alot
mic-wrecker was good with nice flows and also muder
my honest rating...
opener...murder
flow...-wrecker
blows...wrecker
lyricism...wrecker
finisher...murder

da winner is...wrecker

good one murder, try better next time

vote back on my battle

NY State Of Mind 05-11-04 11:11 AM

great battle

both did well, son

but murder had 2 try harder in this

votes...
opener-wrecker
blow-murder
flow-wrecker
struture-wrecker
closer-wrecker

wrecker did good
go 2 da gym murder

3rd-Shift 05-11-04 11:18 AM

uppin for votes lets close this out now holla.......

LyricalMethod 05-11-04 11:42 AM

mic-wrecker i like your verse more b/c yours was easy to understand and read. mc murder your structure was crazy. it was not balanced. you lacked hard hittin punches, mic wrecker had way better punches and multiples thats why he gets my vote. return the favor:Lyricalmethod vs. taken over

vote=mic wrecker

3rd-Shift 05-11-04 11:53 AM

uppin 4 da last vote ka ka ka KO
holla and vote ppl

Infamous J 05-11-04 12:09 PM

great battle

both of you were good but wrecker was better, work on your struture murder

opener-wrecker
flow-wrecker
blow-wrecker
struture-wrecker
closer-wrecker

vote back okay


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