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mc murder VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
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No D/r Votes No Feeding Each Otha No Unexplain Votes No Crew Votes Check In Befo U Spit! |
I’m the envy of new emcee
since I can switch gears quicker then a ten speed You still on training wheels when my rhymes come plenty I’m painting pictures while your mind draws empty You shouldn’t have tempt me cause I’ll more then nudge you gently I’ll drop you on the pile of bullshit you inventing You’re a joke like saying new emcee rhymes are dope Or believing in this battle you actually got hope You’re smoked like a fine cigar Played out like an untuned guitar You retard it could be day while you stand on guard And I’ll still slip past your “arsenal” to spit my bars cause my rhymes are sick as Chinese with sars I’ll vomit on you so u can catch a verse to spar Since I’m first to start don’t mean you the one whos goin finish I have no limits so put me in for a guinness |
awrite for a new emcee aye .................................................. .........................................
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Yo Nigga U A Fuckin Biter
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damn where i saw dis shit at// yo i forgot where but i saw dat shit befo
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ANYWAYS U GOT BEAT ANYWAYZ
A chainsaw'll take the top of your brain off Stabbin the two nuts of a Ku Klux - with scalpels My rap'll leave you shackled My rap is like crack inside a capsule I'll shove an axe in you where your axel Your main point your midsection where your ribs are flexin Infested with injections you can't get rid of the infection Kid you're destined for the death Dead walkin, flesh exertin Walkin through the streets dressed - being a corpse is next Make a mistake a blade'll take ya life away Leave you decayed inside a lake and break your neck down to your spinal blade The gore shit I kick is sick cause I'm a bitter kid I'll stick and vic you bitch RIP you to pieces - pick you out a ditch Go devour dick you coward |
Votes People Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
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we need voted plse .................................................. ...............
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mc murder nice verse. i like your punches and multiples. you had a nice flow but you shwed me one thing. you flowed like anewbie. your structure sucked. XxToXiCXxVeRbZ your verse was good,it could have been better. i really like your personals. it made me think of yall guys fightin to the deth. b/c you hit more personally i give you my vote.
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Aight Dats Whats Up Yo// Uppinnnnnnnnnnn Votes People Lets Go!
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Nice stuff......Both needs to work on things.....But xx took this b.c he did have harder punches in my opinion.......Both work on structure and everything else b/c it was aight....But nothing more to say
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Toxic - iight spit man, you had some alright flow goin on and your punches were pretty good.
Best Line - Stabbin the two nuts of a Ku Klux - with scalpels My rap'll leave you shackled My rap is like crack inside a capsule I'll shove an axe in you where your axel Worst Line - The gore shit I kick is sick cause I'm a bitter kid I'll stick and vic you bitch RIP you to pieces - pick you out a ditch Go devour dick you coward MC - iight spit man.. you had some good punches in there.. just work on keepin your flow the same. Best Line - You still on training wheels when my rhymes come plenty I’m painting pictures while your mind draws empty You shouldn’t have tempt me cause I’ll more then nudge you gently Worst Line - don’t mean you the one whos goin finish I have no limits so put me in for a guinness OVERALL - Weak battle.. but I gotta go wit Toxic cuz he had the better punches and his flow was a little bit better. both need to work on wordplay and get some harder punches.. but overall Toxic's verse was better. Work on your flow a bit MC and harden up those punches. VOTE - Toxic RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123292 |
this was a close battle to judge
and I dont know if Mudrer bit his lins or not but he gave toxic a challenge good battle yu guys but I have to go with toxic he had better punches although thats what both of you need to drasticly work on become more creative v/toxic http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123432 hit that shit up |
i totally agree with my boy gkillaz05 the whole way
Toxic - iight spit man, you had some alright flow goin on and your punches were pretty good. Best Line - Stabbin the two nuts of a Ku Klux - with scalpels My rap'll leave you shackled My rap is like crack inside a capsule I'll shove an axe in you where your axel Worst Line - The gore shit I kick is sick cause I'm a bitter kid I'll stick and vic you bitch RIP you to pieces - pick you out a ditch Go devour dick you coward MC - iight spit man.. you had some good punches in there.. just work on keepin your flow the same. Best Line - You still on training wheels when my rhymes come plenty I’m painting pictures while your mind draws empty You shouldn’t have tempt me cause I’ll more then nudge you gently Worst Line - don’t mean you the one whos goin finish I have no limits so put me in for a guinness OVERALL - Weak battle.. but I gotta go wit Toxic cuz he had the better punches and his flow was a little bit better. both need to work on wordplay and get some harder punches.. but overall Toxic's verse was better. Work on your flow a bit MC and harden up those punches. VOTE - Toxic |
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