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XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-10-04 10:59 PM

mc murder VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 
10 To 15 Lines
No D/r Votes
No Feeding Each Otha
No Unexplain Votes
No Crew Votes

Check In Befo U Spit!

mc murder 05-10-04 11:12 PM

I’m the envy of new emcee
since I can switch gears quicker then a ten speed
You still on training wheels when my rhymes come plenty
I’m painting pictures while your mind draws empty
You shouldn’t have tempt me
cause I’ll more then nudge you gently
I’ll drop you on the pile of bullshit you inventing
You’re a joke
like saying new emcee rhymes are dope
Or believing in this battle you actually got hope
You’re smoked like a fine cigar
Played out like an untuned guitar
You retard it could be day while you stand on guard
And I’ll still slip past your “arsenal” to spit my bars
cause my rhymes are sick as Chinese with sars
I’ll vomit on you so u can catch a verse to spar
Since I’m first to start
don’t mean you the one whos goin finish
I have no limits so put me in for a guinness

mc murder 05-10-04 11:14 PM

awrite for a new emcee aye .................................................. .........................................

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-10-04 11:14 PM

Yo Nigga U A Fuckin Biter

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-10-04 11:16 PM

damn where i saw dis shit at// yo i forgot where but i saw dat shit befo

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-10-04 11:26 PM

ANYWAYS U GOT BEAT ANYWAYZ

A chainsaw'll take the top of your brain off
Stabbin the two nuts of a Ku Klux - with scalpels
My rap'll leave you shackled
My rap is like crack inside a capsule
I'll shove an axe in you where your axel
Your main point your midsection where your ribs are flexin
Infested with injections you can't get rid of the infection
Kid you're destined for the death
Dead walkin, flesh exertin
Walkin through the streets dressed - being a corpse is next
Make a mistake a blade'll take ya life away
Leave you decayed inside a lake and break your neck down to your spinal blade
The gore shit I kick is sick cause I'm a bitter kid
I'll stick and vic you bitch
RIP you to pieces - pick you out a ditch
Go devour dick you coward

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-10-04 11:27 PM

Votes People Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

mc murder 05-11-04 09:45 AM

we need voted plse .................................................. ...............

LyricalMethod 05-11-04 12:10 PM

mc murder nice verse. i like your punches and multiples. you had a nice flow but you shwed me one thing. you flowed like anewbie. your structure sucked. XxToXiCXxVeRbZ your verse was good,it could have been better. i really like your personals. it made me think of yall guys fightin to the deth. b/c you hit more personally i give you my vote.

vote=XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-11-04 05:29 PM

Aight Dats Whats Up Yo// Uppinnnnnnnnnnn Votes People Lets Go!

Metaskriptz 05-11-04 05:58 PM

Nice stuff......Both needs to work on things.....But xx took this b.c he did have harder punches in my opinion.......Both work on structure and everything else b/c it was aight....But nothing more to say

v/xx

GKillaz05 05-11-04 06:06 PM

Toxic - iight spit man, you had some alright flow goin on and your punches were pretty good.

Best Line - Stabbin the two nuts of a Ku Klux - with scalpels
My rap'll leave you shackled
My rap is like crack inside a capsule
I'll shove an axe in you where your axel

Worst Line - The gore shit I kick is sick cause I'm a bitter kid
I'll stick and vic you bitch
RIP you to pieces - pick you out a ditch
Go devour dick you coward

MC - iight spit man.. you had some good punches in there.. just work on keepin your flow the same.

Best Line - You still on training wheels when my rhymes come plenty
I’m painting pictures while your mind draws empty
You shouldn’t have tempt me
cause I’ll more then nudge you gently

Worst Line - don’t mean you the one whos goin finish
I have no limits so put me in for a guinness

OVERALL - Weak battle.. but I gotta go wit Toxic cuz he had the better punches and his flow was a little bit better. both need to work on wordplay and get some harder punches.. but overall Toxic's verse was better. Work on your flow a bit MC and harden up those punches.

VOTE - Toxic

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123292

-Zone Out- 05-11-04 06:10 PM

this was a close battle to judge
and I dont know if Mudrer bit his lins or not
but he gave toxic a challenge
good battle yu guys
but I have to go with toxic
he had better punches
although thats what both of you need to drasticly work on
become more creative
v/toxic
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123432
hit that shit up

lyrical KILLAH 05-12-04 02:29 AM

i totally agree with my boy gkillaz05 the whole way

Toxic - iight spit man, you had some alright flow goin on and your punches were pretty good.

Best Line - Stabbin the two nuts of a Ku Klux - with scalpels
My rap'll leave you shackled
My rap is like crack inside a capsule
I'll shove an axe in you where your axel

Worst Line - The gore shit I kick is sick cause I'm a bitter kid
I'll stick and vic you bitch
RIP you to pieces - pick you out a ditch
Go devour dick you coward

MC - iight spit man.. you had some good punches in there.. just work on keepin your flow the same.

Best Line - You still on training wheels when my rhymes come plenty
I’m painting pictures while your mind draws empty
You shouldn’t have tempt me
cause I’ll more then nudge you gently

Worst Line - don’t mean you the one whos goin finish
I have no limits so put me in for a guinness

OVERALL - Weak battle.. but I gotta go wit Toxic cuz he had the better punches and his flow was a little bit better. both need to work on wordplay and get some harder punches.. but overall Toxic's verse was better. Work on your flow a bit MC and harden up those punches.

VOTE - Toxic


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