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t-storm vs blackwell
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usual rulez blind spit 8-12 linez verses due within the hour |
ok i will spit now i only have half hour, checkin in....
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u can tell this bitch has been "raped" n abused, he loves dicks so much he even changed his name to t-storm... n we all know what that stands for "testacle sworn".. ima leave ya "ripped".. "ditched".. and "torn"... this cat thinks hes a rapper but we'll catch wit his mumma mowin the "lawn"...//
I should shoot the surgeons for having u "born"... the way this fag blows on dicks he should change his name to "fog-horn"...your n illiterate "rapper".. like kids that eat to much cake my disses are simply "fatter"... ima win this as easy as a "shrug"... plus i wrote this faster than aids mixes wit "blood"// |
my spit...
dnt know what i hate most..me dyin o cancer,or havin 2 read this cats posts/
coz iv e seen sum wack shit in my time,but this cat couldnt rap if he bit ma linez/ hes so eager 2 spit..luk at his shit...its obviously prewritten/ but this cat cudnt fuck me even if i had a kitten(pussy)/ ma lethal lyrical injection,leave him 2 dazed n feeling sore/ this guy wana battle me?...fuck u bitch.. im raw/ so ima leave u on the ground..bleeding wit all tha rest/ that blank shell u shot at me..didnt even graze ma vest/ u swing wit no-punches, n like lewis im elite/ maybe i`ll ask u afterwards...u gona retire after this defeat?./ |
dude wtf i wrote that shit in 20 mins dun hate coz it ripped yours
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hell i even had to bunk a lesson to type that shit up so fuk outta here, uppin votes...
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ok.....woteva fukin kid... get bck 2 school....... :thefinger
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Upin This Battle
UPIN THIS BATTLE drop ya links n ill return the favour...............
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WEAK FUCKEN BATTLE
but i'll give ma two cents T. Storm's lines were whack and ghetto, but he had good structure and flow Blackwell had weak punches, but at least he had some. T. Storm-3.5/10 Blackwell-3.4/10 Vote-T-storm Elevate, you gunna need to.... Yo T-storm holla at me we'll hook suthin up |
ok yeah the battle must have been done quick cause it was lacking in some power and difficulty, not many multies flow wand structure were trheir but need to be worked on but neways it goes to t-storm by a hair.....
hey return the fav and vote on shifty-vs-pimp rawb on the front lines i dont have the link sorry, |
This battle was pretty weak... black wells verse didn't seem to have any punches and the flow wasn't all that tight either... While T-Storms punches were weak at least they were there... you both need to work on your multis- your punches and the over all structure of ur rhymes.... VOTE- T-Storm
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I thought the battle was overall average maybe a bit below. T-storm really put the work into this guy and it showed, the flow was better cause blackwell didn't really have any good bars, they were hard to read, and no good punches. T-storm nice opener that was tight that was hotter than any of blackwell's punches. Blackwell try to cut down on the wordiness of your lines and try to get more creative on your punches.
vote - t storm |
aight
vote t-storm
blackwell- you didn't really have punches... ima leave ya "ripped".. "ditched".. and "torn"... this cat thinks hes a rapper but we'll catch wit his mumma mowin the "lawn"...// and i couldn't tell whether you made an attempt at a structure or not, looked like u had one bar or somethin and ur opener didnt rhyme and lines were stretched t- weak verse but it was enough |
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