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Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 11:16 AM

Mc's Reaper =vs= JSmoove
 
10-20 lines
No: feeding, biting, hating, crew votes Unless Honest
Lets go, you spit first.

Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 11:26 AM

I'm checkin in and will be droppin shortly, like soon.

JSmoove 05-11-04 12:16 PM

Just got this...I will drop in a few minutes......

Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 12:36 PM

like *Preist Xcercism* the Demons-are-Rung..Jsmoove
known fa 'Speakin-in-Tounges'.. /
..Known to *WET YOU UP* When Placin ''Kids on LifeSupporters'
to Pump 'Semen-in-Lungs'.. //
And sorry I’m a lil ‘LATE’ but the only ‘DEAD-LINES’ I see...are
in the text-you-enter… /
Go ahead and say it…Wyn got skill while ya get ya
'head snapped back ', like a 'PEZ-dispenser'..!//
My hellish scam got this 'LOCKED' with a 'LATCH and KEY', /
Thought Boogie had some 'FIRE'...but still couldn't 'MATCH with Me'..!//

Outro:.
..Your unable to 'SEE ME' on records with a 'SCOPE' on the wax…
dawg you provokin attack,
Dawg…I’ll attack ya dome with rage…and INCINERATE ya like
the 'SMOKE from a STACK'…
I tell the truth by openin facts like your so 'FULL OF SHIT' that
You ‘CHOKE ON YOUR CRAP’..!!!

Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 02:11 PM

Lets get some votes RB I will return the favor, real nice!

JSmoove 05-11-04 02:12 PM

like stiff dicks im into you//
since pussy is on the menu--im serving you//
im sharp like blades, call me Ginsu*//
and u no need a bill for me to kill you like O-Ren** do//

my spit is venoumous like a cobra n black mamba mix//
i devour u whole n excrete wack rimes in my reptile shit//
im way to sick, and yure azz out like I turn my tricks***//
I murder weak foes, and won't be convict cause the glove**** won't fit//

You 'Reap' what you sow, now I got you diggin' your own grave//
and it's your lyrics I'll be harvesting, hence the shitty haze//
I'm ridiculous, as I get maticulous and R.I.P. you to little pieces//
I smell feces, no that's your bar thesis, man I can't believe this//

reapers suppose to bring death, but you bringing me to life//
like my sperm in the egg of your future wife--//
if you were the ocean, nothing you spit would ever make waves//
u b like jeep cherokee to me, Ima Escalade//

you battle me is like an icecube spitting at the sun//
you a chump, GUMP*****, now take off your braces and run//
next time you battle, you may need to bring your blade n gun//
you b like virgin and for props...grimster u get none//

*Ginsu---sharpest knives you can buy on tv
**O-Ren---ninja crime boss in Kill Bill by Quentin T.
***tricks---prostitutes, hos, sluts
****glove---used by O.J. to kill, but it would fit, so they had to acquit
*****GUMP---Forrest Gump movie

Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 02:14 PM

In my other battles that is cause this guy is a no show!! Gotta mark him.

JSmoove 05-11-04 03:04 PM

Uppin' --don't sleep peeps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JSmoove 05-11-04 04:00 PM

I need votes...UPPIN for real..........................

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-11-04 07:11 PM

Yo mc's reaper got the full wrap he ripped him Structure punches n rhymes

BREAK down

Mc's Reaper

Rhymes 7/10
Flow 8/10
Structure 8/10
Multis 7/10
30/40

Jsmoove
rhymes 6/10
Flow 6/10
Structure 5/10
multis 6/10
23/40

Real Thorough 05-11-04 08:54 PM

Ayo read.
Struc. - Reaper
Meta's - Reaper
Punches - Reaper
Rhyme Scheme - Reaper. Thats basically the fundamentals and reaper got em.
My vote stands clear. v/ Reaper.

DFrost 05-13-04 11:24 AM

aight ima go with jsmoove, reapers lines were too stretched and his flow was off. jsmoove ya came harder with punches, i followed your flow a lot better than reapers and liked the way you put a new spin on some played concepts
reapers suppose to bring death, but you bringing me to life//
like my sperm in the egg of your future wife--//
and personals
You 'Reap' what you sow, now I got you diggin' your own grave//
and it's your lyrics I'll be harvesting, hence the shitty haze//

vote jsmoove

JSmoove 05-13-04 11:48 AM

I wasn't gonna do this, but I'm uppin this one again...for votes!!!

LyricalMethod 05-13-04 11:59 AM

reaper nice verse. your punches were good and your multiples were aight. but smooth you took this battle over. your multiples were good, and so were your punches. you wrote a very good verse. nice flow and rhyme scheme. return the favor: Lyricalmethod vs. taken over

vote=Reaper

LyricalMethod 05-13-04 11:59 AM

i meant jsmooth my fault cuz, nor reaper. slipped my mind..............


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