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feedbak for ths plz as soon as u read it
yo i spit the rhyme//
toexplain wat goes on ma mind// n how it works// the perks//n the falls// walkin round like u got big balls// mine r bigg// wen im old n famous//im gunna b a bigga// figga// than jigga// its a stik up// like fifty cent ill buss u lip up// no disses to 50 cent/// sheet atleast unlike me he can pay his rent// u no me// im the 1 tryin to b like d-o-double g// n dr. d-r-e// boi u aint u got no rhymes//u to pussy to comit violent crimes// dnt get jealous n start h8in mines// yall cant read ma line// thy aint wrote// thy freestyles they cum straight from ma throat// mutha fuker cumin up genst me u gone need a bullet proof coat// c evy nite u go home to go 1 hoe// but me i go home to 3 or fo// dawg get some lyrics// ur shit puts me in hystreics// yo shit is edible// mine incredible// mutha fukin non competible// i aint even on ma best// wen i will u go get smoked like da rest// dnt even risk yo life// dnt cum up genst me if u wanna get out da hood wit sum sorta pride//wen im cumin u better duk n hide// n hit the d-e-c-k//cos u no im playin wit ma a.k// n ne boi tht get in ma way// i will spray//cut ur hed off n serv it on a mutha fukin tray//dnt say damn// i aint dun nutin yet but believe me i will fuk up the program// i made ths rhyme listenin to gansta gangsta not tht it goes wit the flow but u no holla at ya boi |
nice man ;)
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seen can i hav sum more feed plz cmon yall HOLLA @YA BOI
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wasnt bad, The format was still hard to read though...try to even up your lines a bit.
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cc
ok man i feel you it is kinda like the song and does go the the beat keep doin your thing now you should see mine and give me feed back.
mine is: gimme the money |
safe bro i will more pleaz
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Sorry homie, I aint like dat too much
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yo fam i ain't feel it to simple betta lyrics yung
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More Plz
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This was simply "Basics"
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Thats well good Row ;)
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scafe more plz holla at a playa 1time yall
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